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EmmamorningLazy XD 2/17/12 . chapter 12
*people hold me back* *hands in fists* Lemme a' 'im! Lemme a' 'im! I'm gonna get you Master! *does the 'I'm wacthing you' thing*

I'm gonna kill that bastard!

I'm done.

*does crazy dance, cos I'm hyper*

OAO
HowTheMightyNeverFell 12/9/11 . chapter 11
Dun, DUN, DUUUNNNNNNNN! Carly, evil cliffhanger there! Update soon!

OAO
HowTheMightyNeverFell 9/25/11 . chapter 10
EVIL MASTER! I AM GOING TO KILL HIM! I AM GOING TO GO INTO LAURA'S CUPBOARD AND KIDNAP HIM! (When she's not looking) GRR...*tries to be evil but doesn't work*

Good chapter though! Still gonna kill the Master! Just you watch, I'm gonna be armed with chocolate (just in case I get scared) and have my chocolate arm with me!

XD
Laura545 8/15/11 . chapter 9
... :'( !

I love the way you write the Master though. And I love th Master. So I'm feeling very conflicted right now. PPorr people. D:

The shock collar was an interesting idea though. :O Nice one.

UPDATE SOON!

(And now I can actually say that. xD)
Laura545 8/15/11 . chapter 8
...WAH. D':

That is all.

Actually, not its not. You killed Rose. That was harsh. Poor Rose. D: And 9. Aww! You wrote 9 very well by the way. I liked how he was all excited about Earth. :( AND YOU KILLED-ED HIM! D:

On a side note, I can so see the Master as a Trekkie. xD
Laura545 8/15/11 . chapter 7
Firstly: DONT HURT THE DOCTOR! D: I love how he's feeling exactly the opposite of what the Doctor did abuot the Master not going to fight. I like that. But poor Doctor. D: And I like how Lucy thought the Doc would be scared. DEFEND HIM LUCYYYY. D:

Love this though. D:

Oh, oh, and the bit where he goes "and there's one more thing" and then says revenge? Theres this moment where you kinda think he might say "love" because thats what Lucy wants and he's all glad she's on his side. Ahhh it's tense. xD Its ace. :P

And can I just say - warm snow? Thats such a you-thing to write. xD Loved it. It made me laugh. :L
Laura545 8/15/11 . chapter 6
Cant believe im four chapters behind. :S Sorry! D: I suck. D:

Loved this chapter though - I really liked the way you wrote Lucy at the beginning in particular about how she feels kinda like she knows him and then he does something confusing... Thats how I imagine him in my head and I think Lucy would pick up on that.

And his excitement about planets dying is chilling but so awesome at the same time. O.o Well written!
HowTheMightyNeverFell 7/28/11 . chapter 9
It is annoying when you come up with a random idea about 1-2 in the morning :)

Great chapter!

Can't wait for more!
HowTheMightyNeverFell 7/25/11 . chapter 8
Right so now I know why you didn't want me and Taylor reading this. You do know I haad my thoughts on what was going to happen when you said to me 'You're gonna hate me'. and now I see why, but like I said it's only a story. I expected you to kill Rose off, but I didn't think you would do it to the Doctor.

Oh dear the universe is in trouble now the Master is the only Time Lord.

Update soon!

(Surprised, at me wanting you to update this?) :D
Voldy's Worst Nightmare 6/25/11 . chapter 7
dude i swear the doc destroyed gallifrey? :S

Koschei stop taking credit!

great chapter josieeeeeeeeeeeeeeee :D
Voldy's Worst Nightmare 4/8/11 . chapter 6
great chapter but i think you may have posted it in the wrong place XD

this is for that D/M fic isn't it? XD
Laura545 4/6/11 . chapter 5
Awww, Lucy! I loved the fact he made her choose, it was harsh but it was very well done! Loved it! AWesome update! :)

Still feeling bad for the Master and for Lucy. D:

Update soon?
Aietradaea 3/23/11 . chapter 4
Ahh - keyword being "to /physically/ hurt" her, methinks!

Hmm, a role-reversal AU...I do like seeing different people's takes on these. Methinks I'll follow. :) Was a bit doubtful at first, when he went and picked up some human - but it makes /total/ sense now. He wants someone to understand him, doesn't he; he wants someone else to feel how he does, and all the better if that means breaking them how he's been broken?

Keep writing! :)
Laura545 3/13/11 . chapter 4
*Sobs hysterically* I KNOW HE'S NOT A BAD PERSON! I KNOW THAT! Thing is, I actually GET what he's saying. You write him so well. Like, that's exactly how I see the Master. *Nods* And I feel so bad for him! And for Lucy! This was a really good chapter, really moving. Poor both of them. :(

And he better not bloody hurt her, or I'll hurt him. -.- In a loving way. :P
Voldy's Worst Nightmare 3/12/11 . chapter 4
awwwwwwwwwwww D: *huggles the M* :(

*huggles Lucy* :(

awesome chapter! UPDATE!
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