  honeybiscut93 3/26/10 . chapter 5 beautiful wished you continued but its a sorta good way to end not really still good job |
| quicksilverfan 7/5/09 . chapter 4 fin this story |
 redrose2310 12/13/04 . chapter 5more please |
| prttykitty2010 7/6/04 . chapter 5 Good story. Nice job with the whole Lance/Pietro/Evan thing. Please, continue! |
| Sarkywoman 2/29/04 . chapter 5 I first saw this ages ago when you'd only written the first chapter. I wasn't sure it could continue, but now I've read the other chapters, I'm glad you did, this is gold! I knew Lance loved Pietro as soon as he was being weird about them hanging out though. Guys dig the speedy dude! |
| The Chaotic Ones 10/27/03 . chapter 5 please dont leave it there, i love happy endings |
| DemonRogue 10/26/03 . chapter 5 no go on it would be nice to see this played thru, id love for ya to go on |
| SelenaFrost 10/7/03 . chapter 5 HE'S AWAKE! DUDE THAT'S AWSOME AND YES YOU SHOULD CONTINUE! KEEP IT COMING! |
| Storm-Pietro 10/3/03 . chapter 5 NO! continue! |
| Rene Marie 8/2/03 . chapter 5 PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON! pweaze? |
| Dark-English-Rose 6/28/03 . chapter 5 YEY! Aw that's so cute! |
| Polouchi 6/25/03 . chapter 5 No, don't leave it there! This is so sweet! |
| maliks-dragon 6/9/03 . chapter 5 Please write more! This is such a sweet story! |
| sylver rain 4/17/03 . chapter 5 no! don't leave it! more! MORE! |
| VoltageRat 10/19/02 . chapter 5 More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More! :) |
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