Mooooooreeees T_T I keep rereading this 3 I can't wait to see what happens

Oh god, I just love this so much. It's brilliantly written and it's very original. I sense more drama, but for once I don't actually mind it because you got a good plot and its riveting. The tension between them, their conversations, their personalities - perfect. Please continue writing. This is gold!

Interesting. I like it. Update again soon please!

i love that the white Zetsu came for Hidan so soon as well as Ino and Chouji's reactions to Hidan

This is still amazing! I can't wait for the next chapter! I wonder how Hidan will react when he relizes he's feeling Shikamaru's emotions! I love your story!

im so happy that theres another story for ths pairing! the public doesnt do much justice for it -_-

i love how you making the two work together and i cant wait for the next chapter! _

I love this story! It's amazing,I didn't even know this pairing existed!

Interesting :) God I love it :)

very cool chapter i like the fake fight to the jutsu and the meeting with Tsunade it was very funny

also i really like that Hidan doesn't approve of the dead being brought back

Yay! Update! I can't wait for the next chapter, this is very exciting.

this is an awsome story so far i love that Hidan is bound by Shikamaru and can't kill him, i hope to review more chapters as soon as they are posted

also i think the scene between Hidan and Sakura was funny

This is getting good keep going :]

Holy fuck me yeah! I read this story on and was rather disappointed that I couldn't favourite it since I don't have an account (though I am old enough to get one, I chose not too). Brilliant story, I'm glad you haven't pushed them into falling madly in love within the first few chapters. It has a good pace and I love the description, I found the story easy to get into and the situation actually seems plausible, I could actually see this working as an alternative in the Manga. Best of luck! :D

Really good, interested in more - update soon.

Hey, so is this just a two-shot or are there going more chapters?

Just another question here, over time is the jutsu going to back fire making Shikamaru the slave and Hidan the master? Please do contiue this story i really love it!