Very nice! I like your style!

Sincerely,

Releina Artemis

That was great. Just a slice of time, frozen. Good characterizations.

I really liked this! Is it a one shot, or are you going to continue? Please continue! :)

GREAT STORY BUT I HAVE TO SAY UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE IT'S BEEN FROM SINCE 3-25-02 I THINK UPDATE DAMN ATLEAST A AUTORS NOTE AS TO WHY YOURE NOT

*claps hands* Kee! Complete and utter cuteness. Meluvs.

Really good! Short, sweet and great! Faye and Spike!

VERY about writing something longer? You've really got talent for catching the atmosphere, the situation is intact and self-contained(means it's something you find quality novels - makes you imagine the whole thing:))

Ha! Cool! I like the ending and especially the fight between Spike and Faye, interesting. And the whole "free" scenario was funny too. You should write more stories like this. Why not do a series?

Loved it! That was great, cute follow up to Ballad in Plain D, that one was really good, too. You've got the characters down pat, which is a seriously hard thing to do... I sure as hell can't -_-o Keep up the good work and write another, huh?

I loved it ;)

That's a good one. _ You should put these into an anthology and make more! *grins*

Another great story from you. I loved Balled in Plain D, and this is right up there with it. Great writing, loved it!

This really was Bebop-like. Very nicely done!

Lol, that was a good fic! I liked it, it was very... entertaining _ Well written too, good job.

more! please continue it!