This was such a sweet and simple story. I loved Gibbs reaction. I'd be very glad if you decided to write others, because frankly, yours are some of the best McAbby stories I've seen on the database.

Keep writing,

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loved it... especially this:

'And nice? God, was he ever a nice guy. He would do anything for her, even after she broke his heart. If she asked him to jump off of a bridge he'd probably do it, just to make her happy… Although him jumping off of a bridge and getting injured, and most likely dying, wouldn't make her happy... So, she'd never ask him to jump off of a bridge.'

It sounds just like Abby! great job, i would love to see more

My thoughts exactly! Love it! Please do write up the rest of your ideas if you haven't already!

loved it!

i loved this fic- you got abby and Tim perfect- he is such a sweetie- i would love for just a little of something like this to play out on the show- but you fanfic writers are great- pleaseplease write up the other mcabby fics- i know we all would just love it

Aw, that was cute :D You really captured Abby's rambling xD

Awesome, just Awesome! I think you really captured the crazy way Abby thinks, well at least I think so. I would love if they really got back together, sigh. Oh well, that's what fanfiction is for isn't it?

This works nicely. I like it. Tim is such a sweet character and he needs a sweet story. sheila

Very sweet; left me with a big smile on my face. I loved Abby's rambling about Tim's side of the desk, and Gibbs' reaction.

Thanks! :)

So good. The ending was the best had me laughing. *Sigh* I wish the writers would put them together again on the show. But I guess I'll just have live it through your stories and the many other McAbby writers on here. I totally think you should write up the other ways. Great story. )

I wish they would get together like this on the show! You hit the nail on the head with this one!

Do it, please! I loved way #1, the rambling was so Abby and I loved how Tim immediately gave her a second chance. So by all means do the other ways : ) This was so cute! Thanks!

Wonderful! I looove your story! One of my favorite McAbbys!

You could put it in Humor/Romance, 'cause I've laughed all the story!

Just awesome! Please, write the others!