|Reviews for Welcome to His World|
| Nate the Werehog 2/17/13 . chapter 5
| Nate the Werehog 2/17/13 . chapter 4
that was cool. hopefully they get home
| Nate the Werehog 2/17/13 . chapter 3
see he got hurt but sam had to suffer too
| Nate the Werehog 2/17/13 . chapter 2
ok this is really good. dean needs to watch his mouth before he gets hurt
| Guest 8/19/12 . chapter 2
You use AND WAY TOO MUCH! "they heard Sonic remark and the speedy blue hedgehog sped to the trio" How about: "Did someone say my name?" they heard Sonic remark as the hedgehod sped to the trio."
That's a SIMPLE fix..it could be MUCH better...but...using speedy and sped in the same sentence...just sounds awful
| Guest 8/19/12 . chapter 1
Dean's dialogue is a tad bit off. He's a douche...but not as big of a douche as your making him out to be. Be more descriptive.
| TheEndOfTheWorld19 8/14/11 . chapter 1
Ha you really capture Deans shouty nature, it would be funny if you dropped Castial in too