|Reviews for Errosion|
| TheSaku 5/7/13 . chapter 23
T-T Conti Conti Conti TTwTT
| Izzie 4/18/13 . chapter 23
If I had the chance to kill Karai... I WILL! :(
Poor Leo,please oh please hang on! :'(
Update soon! Onegaiii
| Guest 4/9/13 . chapter 23
What is that annoying woman going to do with Leonardo? Hasn't he suffered enough? I can't stand her! She must pay for all Leo's suffering and his family's.
Another awesome chapter, can't wait to read the next one.
| Rose Black Dragon 4/9/13 . chapter 22
They must know for sure or at least suspect that Leonardo didn't want to do all what he has done. The goodbye to Mikey is the proof. Something tells me this is far from over...
| The Tip of My Tongue 4/7/13 . chapter 23
Oh... no... LEO! D: Is he dead?! :,(
This was such a sad chapter... you had me in tears.
Nicely written! As always, I look forward to more.
| Scribe of Turesa 4/7/13 . chapter 23
LEO! Oh please update soon!
| Peach Wookiee 4/7/13 . chapter 23
Excellent work. Since I haven't seen the TMNT movie (the most recent one), I am guessing Leo actually survives this encounter. But this chapter certainly makes me wonder.
| Smile or else 4/7/13 . chapter 23
Aaaawww! POOR LEO!
Update soon, please, this is really good.
| BubblyShell22 4/7/13 . chapter 23
Oooh, I hate Karai so much right now. She's so evil to do this to Leo. I really hope the Turtles find him soon, but judging by this story, they may not even look for him as they may not know what has happened to him. Nicely done on this. I'll be eagerly awaiting an update.
The Bubbly One,
| Jaddis 4/7/13 . chapter 23
Poor Leo sacrifices himself and his family doesn't even know. I'm trying to see how this can have a happy ending. I've got nothing.
| yukio87 4/6/13 . chapter 23
Aw I feel sorry for Leo, he is suffering so much and noone of his brothers will go to help him, and now he is so indefense, I expect that something happens to help Leo or Mikey, Donny and Raph can think a little about Leo's behavior and that why he was behaved in that way with them and know that now he is in big trouble. Please Leo holds on there.
| yukio87 2/26/13 . chapter 22
Poor Leo he is suffering with his secret and he tries to save his brothers's lives but he can't tell them the truth, I hope that he can tell the truth and go back to his family and explain everything to them, I'm waiting the next chapter anxiously and wiith my hopes that Leo is fine and can find a solution to his problem.
| TmntRr 2/17/13 . chapter 22
One question, why didn't he tell the others about it through meditation? He could have pretended to be asleep or something. I was just wandering :)
This story is really good. :)
| Aroa S. Quadrale 2/14/13 . chapter 22
Leo! D: I am so worried about him! Karai needs to be taken care of! D: Raph and Splinter seemed like they may have been catching on, but it could go either way. You leave me with horrible anticipation with each chapter! ;D
| NataljaMenethil 2/6/13 . chapter 22
It is a really complex topic & grim circumstances you chose to explore, quite a challenge. But you did well. All the reactions & behavior of the characters seem rightful to me. You have also managed to give quite impressive descriptions of emotions, they made me sweat-drop at some points))
Still, the way you composed it feels like a bit crumpled & chaotic to me - mostly because you constantly change the point of view. I understand the reasons for that, but somehow it doesn't have the desired effect. Nevertheless, this one is a small drawback compared to your exploration. Good job ;-)