This is absolutely wonderful, with well-thought-out motivations. It really was an amazing fanfic, and you have such an astonishing writing talent.

And I didn't even mind that it was really long, because I was like, "wait..don't end yet..." and I read the entire thing in maximum 10 minutes? Not sure. But I really enjoyed it too much to not finish reading it.

Great job with this. Now I'm off to go read Diamond Tears. Thanks for writing! Keep up the awesome writing!

This was without a doubt the best Beyond Birthday fic I've ever read. Your characterization of BB is perfect, and the mind games between L and B were incredibly written, along with the whole story. It was absolutely fantastic. :D

Amazing...attrative writing, pleanty of passion, and intriguing characterization. I love it. i was extremley glad to hear that this chapter was contiues, otherwise i would have gone begged desperatley for another update! :) now i 'm off to submerse myself in another master piece...keep them coming! _

This is fabulous. Go write a book so I can read it. Please. It must've been really hard to write from the perspective of someone so unstable. I can't even find words... This is just so amazing! The characters were going through so many different emotions, and I was right along with them... Crazy, I tell you! Thank you so much!

yay some body finaly mentioned A, i hat how people just ignore him! btw i like it, metal B!

Oh gosh I love this story, it's so "igaffk." I had to log onto another account so it would let me review again. :33 It's so dark. D: And you write Beyond beautifully.

Oh and this is Chemical Kid. ;D

Oh, oh my goodness. That was so.. dark. Yet, in a way, it was beautiful. Though the beauty is shrouded by darkness. B wanted control so badly, he would do anything, but L gave up without a fight, or at least a rough one. So in the end, I wanted to cry, though no tears would flow. Because in a way, this story made me feel extreme happiness and admiration for this pairing. Though that too was hidden behind the darkness.

A truly wonderful and well written story, you have some amazing talent. Please write more soon.

Phen 13

Oh my god...

That was one of the best stories I have ever read on Fanfiction. I love your style of writing! I also love how Beyond was able to reduce L's composure and strength down to next to nothing. Very well done! :D

I loved it, I would reread it twenty times if it wasn't already midnight! It's beautiful, I especially like the thoughts, how quick yet dramatic they are. The only questions I have is how old is L in the story and how the F-ing hell Beyond got A's blood out of the donor bank? Awesome and Amazing!

The length, the quality, the fanfiction itself. . .I love it. A wonderful job, I have to admit! God, this is an awesome fic. I'm now officially hooked to LxBeyond, and it's all thanks to you. xD

love this 3

Hey!

I just found your fanfiction and I could not stop reading. I like the way you're writing what Beyond thinks and says- so I like how you think Beyond is.

And, of course, I like what's happening. ;)

I think this is one of the best fanfictions about Beyond I've ever read. I really like it.

And that's also why I wanted to ask whether I can translate this fanfic (I'm from Germany). I think the German fanfic-reader would like to read this one too and if it's okay for you I'd really like to translate it.

Greetings

Beyond

PS: I'm sorry if my English is terrible... *grin*

Awwwwww! I loved that so much! Probably one of the best LxB FICA out there! X3

How has this got no reviews?

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I'm sorry, words can't describe what I feel towards this story... You've pretty much restored my hope in LxBB pairing...

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Insta-Fav'. C: 3 This was incredibly well written,emotional,and I'd LOVE to see more like this from you in the future, even if you're just writing it for my benefit.

P.s; Your Beta and Friends were right.