whoa! radomness in an unfunny way! i like it! even though this story is hoplessly confusing! you want names? uh...ok...Yatja is the name of the predator species, Fangora is the code name of a character in one of my fics (MY IDEA! ALL MINE! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!) uhh...vasquez from aliens along with riply and that whole gang...uh...CALVIN AND HOBBES! _

CAROLLYMINION! FINISH IT! FINISH IT! DO IT NOW! *L* *megasuperhugeglompyhugglers* And, uhm, yeah, I know I didn't sign in to do this... I'm at school _

Okay, I have two names for you; Willa and Let, both are girl names.

Very cool fic! The begining was pretty funny. The end was a little strange, but still awesome. As for the name thing...how about...Veroique uh... how about Lian? I dunno. I had was daydreaming today and there was a character named Veronique. She had no last name. So the Lian thing is just off the top of my head. I'm a first name person. Last names are usually beyond me. So there's my...contribution. If you want to call it that. NEway, great fic! Twas very enjoyable.

Coolie addition. Yeah, I kinda realized ch 5 was a repeat but I had already pressed the review button anyway, lol. You can remove it by going to 'edit/chapter management' or what ever that is called. The same thing you use to upload. Pick this story scroll down to the list of chapters, there's a blue link next to each chapter saying 'remove' just click it next to five and it's gone. You do have to rearrange you chapters though. 2 usually goes to 1 when I have to do that. Just change the numbers next to the chapter on the left to make it 1-6 or it would be 5, sorry. Anyway, great work I look forward to more!

Wow! That was SO cool! Post more soon! PLEASE! Very interesting twist, I like it. Wonderful job!

It's great!

Please, please write more.

Ananda

This is agreat, concise chapter! I like her clean, intelligent explinations and the comedy in it all... woohoo! Hey, what's wrong with self-insertion as long as it's done right... right? As long as you keep your goal in sight and don't make the other characters do anything out of character... you're fine! And how I would love for some romance! ;)

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Hmmm...either I'm blind or you uppied while I was reading ch. 1. *shrug* probably blind heh. Anyway, good addition and I'll be watching for the update! Wonderful work.

Lol! That was funny! I was smiling or laughing the whole chapter! Great work! More soon!

I like where you are going with this and look forward to future postings. Soon I hope.

Sue ;)

They're in the twilight zone. Now how are they going to get back to their own world?

OH, do continue. Very interesting. I just love these I get sucked into another universe fics:)

Please continue! This is very good. I like that you allowed her to know about the SW universe, will make for an interesting plot.

Just wanna know one thing. Is Qui Gon still gonna die in this story? Just wondering because I love his character...

Nice story! I really like this! This would definitely be the reaction of a few people I know, I myself would be in shock but my one friend would react this way.