Awesome! I love your detail! (please continue).

Hm... I'm thinkin the shadows are Jecht an Tidus's mother? O_O'' I really have no clue. Braska? Maybe Yuna on Valefore... the white feather... wtf DX GOOD STORY! I want more!

Oh!

Man, this is GOOD!

Too bad you never continued though...*cries*

Oh well...*adds to faves*

Well, the shadows were...

I mean they were obviously...

Okay, I have no clue. Who were the shadows?

More Auron/Tidus, please? XD

holy shit! i cant beleive this only has 31 reviews- thats ridiculus! *goes off to hurt sumthing*

*is back* sorry bout that _; *nervous laugh* ehheh this is reaaly an amazing oneshot! it was incredibly sweet and briliantly written! it was verry enjoyable to read, so i give this review and a cookie *summons giant chocolate chip cookie* -

damn Auron and his legendary self-control! ugh! great story, by the way. I hope you continue it!

SK

the chapter one thing is such a tease! And you haven't touched this since 2002! ;-; Which makes me sad, because this was really, REALLY extraordinarly beautiful, very well written.

wow! loved the story! please keep it going!

That was a good story. I just love it. Hope you will write some more. Keep up the good work.

Salima

WHE! I love you.

oh my god. beautiful. beautiful. beautiful *0*

hm i think is Braska and Jecht cause i dunno i have a feeling hehe well great job

Nice. I loved the imagery here. Kudos to you for writing such a lovely piece!

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