great story hope you keep it up )

Amaazing ! please keep writing, loving the Zeke&Sunny. Hope she lives 3

Ellie xxx

awsome story update soon

please Kate Live

Dear Fireguitar,

This is a good story, as a writer you have to write like it was happening to you. Now if you were Kate, you wouldn't want to have been hit by a bike and all your friends are standing around not helping you or calling an ambulance waiting for her boyfriend to come out and find her? It's good writing but i guess u just wanted to write it out so that you could put it out there. It is a great story you just left some bits out of it. Thanks for a great read.

Your Friend,

YourLoveMyLove x