Cool story. I look forward to the next chapter. :)

Great beginning! Is Bayukya going to be the one adopted into the Kuchiki Clan instead of Rukia?

Nice Story. I love the plot. It kinda goes with the serious except you changed a couple of things. And Byakuya is my favorite character . That makes it even better. I can't wait to see what else you have in sotre for this little tale. I will be awaiting the next phase.