Here's to...being, Home!

With 'New Zeal' in US ;}

What a beautiful story. I really liked the end, it was perfect.

No lemon needed, this was perfect!

Really, really good story. For a moment or three you almost had me believing Edward would return to N. Z. for good. Loved the little twist with the other job offer.

Thank you for sharing.

That was so beautiful! You're an amazing writer. It made me cry so much. I loved it.

Great one shot! I've put this on story alert just in case you decide to write about Edward's return..or the day he moves in with Jasper...or the day they get married...or just the next time they get it on...lol Lemons, more lemons please. ;-)

omg... that was soooooooo amazing! I did cry and felt my heart break during this short story and then... well, then, I was so completely and utterly in love w/ both these boys! Just WOW! For a short story to move me soo much... *sigh* just WOW!

Loved it!

Sweet story!

Thank you,

carolyn.

Fantastic story. Thanks for sharing.

beautiful! i loved this!

Oh I loved this beautiful story. These boys were meant to be together. A followup chapter would be greatly appreciated...you know...just to recap the last few lines of the story!

Thanks so much for writing. Sue xx

Ooh loved it! You could cut the sexual tension with a knife. Remind me why they decided to wait until their last night together again? LOL. A lemon would have made this story perfect, so I'm going to put it on story alert, just incase you decide to do a ch2.

wonderful oneshot :)

No Lemon, shame on you. LOL I could easily see a outtake or even a continuation of your story. There is just something about both Edward and Jasper as professionals that is entriguing. Just different from most of the edward and Jasper fics, their language, demeanor, and taylored suits are hot! ;).