Nice fic. The story is interesting and the characters are well thought out.

Love the fic. Please write some more and can you probably include some of the other Shuffle! characters? Awesome plot by the way.

will there be more chapters?

Please update soon.

This is a really great story so far. Please update it soon. -pokes-

Dang this story is good! Make sure you update soon. (poke's author in shoulder)

i just finished this series a few days ago and i loved how it ended with rin and asa and everyone else but i really liked how it ended with sia and kaede kissing during the credits. i thought it would make a good story and i find you here writing one. i really hope that you continue working on this piece, sure not the most amount of people may read it but still those who liked the show will and all of them, including myself will really appriciate if you kept on writing it.

Please update I really love this story! :)

I think this story would have great potential if you would... Err... Not to be rude... UPDATE IT! This is really the only cou

Oh this is a really great story you have thus far! Why haven't you updated it yet? I won't be able to get this story out of my mind now! XD I saw no grammatical errors and the way you portrayed the characters was done extremely well. Completely believable! I've been dying to find SiaXKaede works from doujin to fanart and then stumbled across this story and I'm so happy! Please update as soon as you can! I can only imagine what will happen between them on their journey in town. I can't wait! XD Good luck to future chapters! Check mine out too if you get the chance/know the anime they're from. Thanks for sharing such a good story with me. O.L. 3:56PM 7/8/11

Interesting read so far, look forward to reading more, keep going :)

Oh! A siaxkaeda fic! I sooooo wanted to read and write one. Thank you, I hope you continue soon.