*Grins* What can I say? You did good.

Pretty good, I liked the image of Billy having an accident in the van. And I loved BA's last line.

I liked this story. There are very few good stories written about BA, but I think I would count this as one of them. The pacing of the story was good and the characterization for BA was well-done as well. I would have liked to know a little bit more about where they were when he stopped to pick her up, where he stopped to get gas, etc., just to get more of a sense of movement. But otherwise, it was a great story. Good job.

Cathy

I really enjoyed reading this. Your portrayal of BA was really insightful and sympathetic. An excellent 'slice of life fic' :)