I'm so confused! I have a feeling it's about their kid, but I'll just have to keep reading... this is really good so far!
-Ahria

Hm... I don't like birds. They scare me. ^_^ You've kept everyone in character... it's interesting so far...

-Ahria

this story is so great...i love Xaina, she's so kawaii!

I really like your fic. It's really good so far! Please update soon!

hallo

what a lovely story...kidding

i REALLY like this story. its plot is so different than ne others i've read.

xaina is so cute! i love her character.

the only thing i don't like bout this story is the fact there's things stronger than xelloss. i like it when xelloss is stronger than everything. eh, that's just my opinion. i can deal with him not being strongest as long as he isn't killed.

akai

For the love of...update the fic!

Another good chapter... In which some things are solved, but other things are not. In particular, I really liked the end of this installment...

^-^ Oi oi, read up, all caught up.
o.o Still love this. Realy good.
I bet Kendra, and Xaina will be good friends.
^-^ Please continue to write on!
*cheers and waves a banner*

wow, intriguing. it's getting pretty confusing with the birds/people. who are they? i hope the next story tells so, cause i'm curious. and yeah, destiny is c-r-e-e-p-y.

Koolness! Kawaii and all that jazz! Kendra's cool. I have a friend with her name but I'm more of this Kendra's personality. Xelly-chan is soooooo kawaii! I wanna see more....more...more!!!!! Please. Well ja ne
~minimerc

Yes, Kendra is cute! ^^ This was a very nice part. I liked it, and the bit of Xellos torture was amusing as well...

Cool. Write more soon! Please continue! I hope you write more soon, real soon. Ja ne
~minimerc

Great job! I love the new characters, well i guess they're not really new cause they were destiny's birds, but they're just as good. I want to know about the other birds too! Please continue your story.

Yay! Another chapter! ^^ It was amusing, sure enough. Destiny's 'birds' are getting rather intriguing... Can't wait to see where this goes from here.

Hey ya!! Cute story. . but I have one little, tiny spelling thing for you. . Filia is a blonde and Gourry is a blond. A blond man has no 'e' but a blonde woman has the 'e'. Not a big deal!

Good story though. . very entertaining. So much of Slayers fan fiction isn't very good. . so this is very refreshing! 0:)