OMG! You are such an amazing writer... I love all your stories. "This Is Immortality" is my favorite, but I really like this one too. Are you a professional writer? I'm striving to be one. Please, if you have time, e-mail me at
Wow. This is really, really sweet. I hope you do decide to make it the first in a series, because it was great. The end had me crying my eyes out. Really touching.
A lovely story, Ananke. I've always hated the whole Ares-in-a-tomb thing, but you actually managed to write it in a way that's very touching and beautiful ... but not mushy. Well done.