sweet! I love your writing and the story!

*stunned speechless*

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that...that was...the best story... i have ever read. it made me laugh, cry, jump for joy, and punch my own hands in frustration. it went the whole freakin' 9 yards. even right now...i can't believe it's over... it makes me sad, sort of... but...they WILL meet again, right? well, i guess i'll just leave that to my imagination. this story, although it didn't have the happy ending i wanted, was EPIC. epic, but disturbing in the most beautiful way possible. i...i just... oh my god, i think i'm gonna cry again...

i wish i was half as good a writer as you are. u...wow. that's all i can say. wow.

i'm still getting over the fact that it's still over... i luv u, u know that? i still feel like crying... damn.

? CHICHIRI U DUMBASS! WHY THE HELL ARE YOU- ARGH! I CAN'T EVEN FORM A COHERENT SENTENCE! DAMN IT, JUST IGNORE UR STUPID VOWS AND LUV KIORI, U DOOFUS! ARGH!

*takes deep breath and exhales*

...okay. i'm done. luv the chapter by the way -

GREAT CHAPTER! I LUV IT! U'RE JUST PLAIN AWESOME! I CAN'T HELP IT!

FINALLY! FINALLY CHICHIRI KISSED KIORI! I'M THE HAPPIEST PERSON ALIVE!

...i feel bad saying this... but that just made reading through all those deaths worth it. IT WAS ADORABLE! I WAS SQUEALING WITH JOY! OOOOHHHHH! I LUV U, YA KNOW THAT?

*takes deep breath and exhales*

ok... i think i've calmed down somewhat...

...why must there be so many deaths? why couldn't aoi be saved?... WHYYYYYYYYYYY? ;.;

i mean...aoi...and akai... THEY WERE SUPPOSED TO MAKE MURASAKI!

urgh...well, u know what i mean.

they JUST kissed, for crying out loud. they JUST expressed their feelings for eachother! why did death have to separate them? it's just...so sad... ;.; U'RE KILLING ME!

koji... ;.;

i cried again. it's very rare for me to cry TWICE during one story. but i cried for chichiri...now for koji. though i do feel a bit numb from the emotional breakdown i had with chichiri... i was only able to shed a tear. but...he...he was supposed to get MARRIED! how could he...? but... oh, god.

...i'll miss that idiot.

...koji...

;.;

this chapter...was shocking. the "guy talk" literally had my mouth falling open. i was literally gaping at the screen. i was like... CHICHIRI? anyways...i still luved it -

p.s.

i gotta say, u're pretty cruel showing little snippets of the next episode or whatever. i can't stop reading!

ROFL! LMAO! I LUV THIS CHAPTER! it was pure AWESOMENESS! i luv the pond scene, with boshin-chan, and the warriors. i luv the 'land monster''s attack, too very creative. anywho, i just have to say one thing, but u already know what it is. *ahem*

YOU'RE AWESOME!

...well, maybe that's 2 things...

! KIORI, U ROCK!

...okay. i'm XTREMELY happy with this chapter. u are great! no, more than that. u are ! whatever the hell that means.

anyways, AWESOME CHAPTER!

DAAAAA! CHICHIRI'S AWAKE! I'M SO HAPPY! AND HE'S SAFE!

anyways, i luv otoo-san's personality. it's funny XD and, the way u described aji made me wanna see him / / / / anyways, i luv the chapter! u're the best writer EVER!

*stands silent in a looonnnggg moment of shock*

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*takes deep breath*

YOU'RE THE BEST! CHICHIRI DIDN'T DIE! YAY!

i've gotta admit, i was so scared he would really be dead, that i was sorta hesitant to read this chapter... but, thanks to a few encouraging words from IttyBittyTidbits, i did. so, really, u must thank her. but... i would've probably read it, anyway, since ur story is so damn good.

even though i would've been SUPER mad at u if chichiri stayed dead. but i was like "what the hell? chichiri's, like, the main attraction! he CAN'T die!"

so i read. and let me tell u something...

U'RE GONNA END UP GIVING ME A HEART ATTACK!

gotta luv u for it, though even if i DO have a heart attack right now, at least i'll die happy

THE CHIBI MAN LIVES!

please...please tell me chichiri didn't die... *sob* i'm...*sniff*...i...

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this was...the most...*sob*..painful chapter...i've ever read in my life... chichiri...was... oh god...please, tell me he didn't die...

it was beautiful...;.;

HOLY SH**! THAT WAS THE BEST F***IN' CHAPTER I'VE EVER READ IN MY LIFE! OMG!

please excuse the french, ladies and gents.

BUT THAT WAS TOTALLY F***IN' AWESOME! U HAD ME AT THE EDGE OF MY SEAT! I WAS HORRIFIED WHEN I REALIZED THAT TASUKI...TASUKI...TASUKI... OMG, I CAN'T EVEN FORM A COHERENT SENTENCE! IT WAS THAT DAMN GOOD!

I ABSOLUTELY LUVED IT! *squeals* I LUV U! I LUV U SOOOO MUCH! (no homo)

I LUV U!

I LUV UR CHAAAAAAPPPPPTTTTEEEERRRRR! great job! i luv the part where the two bandits, empress houki, and ritsuka are stranded in the middle of pouring rain. it was hilarious XD "amusing group of companions" indeed. lol.

anyways, i really like Mizu, too. she has such a sweet personality it's a shame setsuka is just using her...grr...

anyways, i think i'm starting to sense a little fluff with chichiri and kiori / / / / they're so cute together. great job! anyways...i guess that's all for now.

oh, and what do the names 'ritsuka' and 'kiori' mean? i was just wondering.