I like this! Please keep going; I can't wait to read more! Normally I'm

not very fond of fics that involve a lot of new charas, but that's usually

because those types of fics tend to start focusing on JUST those charas.

Yours, thankfully, isn't like that at all. Not only that, but I even LIKE

your made-ups, because they're believable. They have definite, individual

personalities, without being overly stereo-typical or cardboard cutouts. I

especially like Kiori, as well as Ritsuka and Akai. Also, you've done a great

job with Houki - I know she must be hard to write for, since she was never in

the series/OVA very much. Kudos on all counts! _ Although I like the "no

da's" better, I'm not bothered by your use of "ya know" instead. (I'm also one

of the so-called "traitorous" dubb-watchers. What's so bad about that,

anyway? They're English voices aren't that bad...I rather like some of them,

like Chichiri's. Besides, this way we get to stare at the pretty pictures more.

Hehehehe...*cough*) Anyway, I REALLY like the interplay between Chichiri and

Kiori. Kawaii! That battle scene was awesome, too; I just LOVE watching

Chichiri and Tasuki kick some major ass! And that wasn't even their full power, ne?

Interesting. I can't wait! Totemo sugoi! Plus I'm extremely curious about Mizu

and her connections to Chichiri, though I do have my suspicions. (Why yes,

Chichiri IS my fav chara. How could you tell? ;;;;) Well, this has gotten to be

awfully long, so I'd better shut up now. But I really hope I get to read more

soon! Sore ja! _

Wow! Your story is positively amazing. With a good taste of originality along with some old characters we've all grown to love, I'm certain this story will be a masterpiece once it's done.

What I don't get is why there are so little reviews...

Alcathradiel

It's getting more and more interesting...nexxxxxxxxxxxtttttttt!

Just as promised, here is my long review! All I can say is: Wow...this is...really, really good! I've been wanting to read a well-written story like this one! I'm so pleased to have found such a good one! I feel that my praise sounds empty, but I don't mean it to sound that way. In fact, I want you to continue this story as soon as possible-I mean, it's definantly well-written, you have a knack for wonderful descriptions, and your characters are likeable! It's so hard to find likeable characters...and they interact with the seishi so well! It cracks me up! And I really like Akai-she's sounds just like some fangirl meeting her hero. I wish she'd get someone...I mean, she is sweet! And I can't wait till we get to see Kouji! Kouji is so neglected! It's sad really. I _love_ Kouji-he's my favourite side-character! I can't WAIT till the next chapter comes out! Hurry! I can't take the suspense!

Wow...I can't believe I never read this before! Look at what I was MISSING! My word, this is well-written! And...probably the best beginning to a fic I've read in a great long while. I just _had_ to review this chapter, but I'll write a LONG review after I finish chapter four. I'm apalled that I haven't thought to read this yet! What in the WORLD was I doing!

Haha! I loved the last bit. Ne, hurry up the next chapters! _

Hehehe Tasuki got beat by a girl. I like this story a lot can't wait for the rest.

I like interesting chapter! I think I know who the other warrior is!

yay! 3rd chap is finally up! i cant wait for the next!

oh man oh man oh man I love this! its soooo kewl! absolutely amazing I cant wait to find out what happens next please hurry with the next chapter!

I tried to review before, but the comp was being and idgit. I love this story.

The story is very interesting...but the paragraphing should be a bit clearer...but great story anyway!

Great start I cant wait to read more. It seems like thats how most people would act it they were face to face with Chichiri and Tauski. I love it