Alright, thankyou very much for finishing up this storey. I have been reading this story since I was 12 years old, Im 18 now. Im sure I have replied with somehting like this before as well, but I cant help it. Your stories are amazing, and Im sure if you changed the names around, and maybe the shape of the milinium items you could honestly get this published.

OMG! I finally got an account! Well, I love this story! Please continue to to write more you have amazing poential s an offical author!

Yay _ Very very good story! And i liked the trailer as well! Keep it up _

Oh yes. I am totally confuzzled. .

Hmm . . . interesting . . . I'm still a little baffled at the ending . . . would it have anything to do with the fact that Yuugi gave into his anger and vengeance at the end? So, basically, because he failed to show compassion to Pegasus, that's why he failed? Give me an email at and let me know if I'm close. If not, let me know, but don't tell me. I'll reread your fic again and figure it out! I luv puzzles!

Kurama no Miko2003

Whoa. That I wasn't expecting.. The ending I mean. Just finished reading the whole fic - it's pretty long by the way.. Took me forever to finish! But it was worth it.

To tell you the truth I've been wanting to read this for some time.. The little hints I've read in other places really managed to peak my interest!

Well.. I guess I'm off now, I've got lots to do yet.. Do continue writing like this! It's so different from most of the fics out there, it feels fresh every time I come across something like this. ..Did that make any sense? No matter. The point is that I really love your writings.

Yaay!I LOVE YOUR FIC'S ZOO THERE THE BEST!

_

I already started reading XX09, and in the first chappie it's not quit as good as this one but it's still good._ But can I ask a favor?Can you not make it so LONG. K? K.-

(((What the hell, what the HELL, WHAT THE HELL, WHAT THE BLOODY ! #$-ING HELL WAS THAT? I spent 3 hours strait reading this fic, and THAT'S how you end it? *suppresses urge to kick the monitor across the desk* In and out. Calm and light. Ooookaayyy.)))

My sincere apologies. _U I think you had a good thing, and (minus the Sailor Moon "Angel"/Sailor Scouts' involvement) this was shaping up to be an excellent fic. However, I must say I was rather disappointed with the last three chapters.

There are some gaping plot holes; how did Yami and Seto escape the Paradox holograms? what was the real point of the Sailor Scouts? And how, _how_ (or for that matter, _what_) can a android ejaculate? 0_o

I also found these chapters extremely rushed... they didn't seem as deeply developed as the earlier ones. You can certainly write things any way you want, but could you at least fix the plot holes? And it looks sorta like you stole the concept for the very last scene from "The Giver". _U

I did appreciate some of the thoughts on hope and friendship, and your duel between Yuugi/Yami and Bakura/Ryou was great.

I think I would just remove the scouts entirely from this fic, and replace them with either made-ups or original Yu-Gi-Oh characters. (Mai? Croquet? The really ugly security guy? Think of the possibilities! _- ) Also, I’d try to tie the angel more closely in to Millennium items. I know it's supposed to be AU, but for me the thing is spoiled by the lack of connection between the angel and the Egyptian past. Ah well, like I said, you write it the way you want it! _-

I am confused. Again. (I REALLY hope this review won't make me look like a complete baka, which it probably will, but I'll live.) Okay, first of all, how did Yami and Seto escape dueling with the Paradox brothers? And what's up with Usagi? I don't really understand her role in this fic... x_x Next question: about the Sailor Senshi. When they were in the Shadow Realm with Yuugi, why wouldn't they help him? Are they suppose to be evil or in some kinda trance? Last question: About the ending. Was Yuugi not suppose to win? Spare Pegasus? Forgive and forget? Please tell this baka brain of mine.

Okay, other than all the confusion up there, I think I liked this fic. It was pretty well written, and had a unique plot. :) Keep writing!

that was so good! Please

cont-

*boom*

Well, that killed that side of me. No. No, i don't think so.

Can we say, 'cliche'? For all those people who like this story, you

have

something WRONG with your head. Seriously, what is up with you people

these

days?

First of all, umm, all the Senshi dying? Urm, if this was placed AFTER

Stars, they would be away to other places? Yeah...

Second of all, 'we were just friends in the past. i remember now. you

loved

another, though you stayed my friend even though i loved you. find your

real

love Usako. find him and be happy.' HAHAHAHA! Riight. He remembers

JUST

when he dies. Uh hum. WAY cliche.

Third, is well, you REALLY need to get an editor to help you. Okayz?

Now, I now you're a newbie to here, but don't think you're going to get

a

few hundred reviews writing what has been written a couple thousand

times.

And really, don't cry over flames. It's really childish, unless you are

one.

-Maiden Usagi (p.s. flame me on my e-mail all you want. I'll flame you

back)

*stare*

Oh, my God... Oh my GOD, this was bad. I only skimmed a few lines and

this

was BAD.

Ugh. I swear. As for the plot, trite, pathetic and predictable. Oh,

wow,

Usagi/Serena has the most unique wand EVER! Go figure.

This isn't Usagi, this is you using Usagi so that you won't get flamed

for

writing a Mary Sue. No, this is a Mary Sue in disguise.

Usagi doesn't deserve this. Harry Potter doesn't deserve this. The

entire

crossover FANDOM doesn't deserve this.

I'm not sorry for being harsh. This is one of the worst fics I've ever

seen

in crossovers. The only fics that can top it are Mary Sues from the

REAL

fandoms, like Escaflowne, Megami Kouhosei and Yu-Gi-Oh.

Anyone that enjoys this definitely is either a) in elementary school or

b)

has the mindset of a small child. God help them all.

D-chan

::Sam sighs, grabs a slip of paper, labels it "the last of Sam's sanity" and kisses it goodbye::

Dear gods, you've thoroughly confused me. I'm going to be thinking about this until I fall asleep, and then again when I wake up, and while I write my Hamlet paper, and probably all day Monday too! And I'm willing to bet that I *still* won't understand it until 2:49 AM next Tuesday!

OK. I'm still coherent. A bit.

So, let me ask this first: How did Kaiba and Yami Yuugi escape from Para & Dox when they were dueling? I think we forgot to cover that.

Now then - Did everybody die? (Although I get the idea that Yuugi would have died anyway, whether or not he defeated Pegasus.) My gods, does this story not end happily? ... I should be happy that you're being original in having the protagonist fail, but you wrapped me up in the story so well that it makes me sad! ... Did you make the Sailor Senshi evil? ... -_- Or at least... Evil and Good are so mixed up in this fic. Altough I'm quite confident when I say that, unlike in Naoko's original comic, the Sailor Senshi in this fic are not just fighting for what's right and pure and good and such. Oh boy.

At first I thought that Usagi had been a prisoner of Pegasus, but now I'm not so sure. Did she want Yuugi to kill her, like Emurade in Magic Knight RayEarth? Or was it just the only way to get rid of Pegasus, like with Ryou and Yami Bakura? o_x ::keels over and twitches::

Right. I'll review again later after I've thought on this. Probably on Wednessday or something. _

Sam

You killed Jounouchi now. ;_; Will it ever end?

... right. This fic actually is completed. -_-

Heh. Although for a while there you had the 3 merchandise characters: Yami Yuugi, Kaiba, and Jounouchi.

... kinda interesting that he went out with the Red Eyes.

... next part! _

Sam

WHAT!

You killed Ryou! ACK! You killed him!

... yeah, so I said I was gonna go to bed after reading chapter 5. I lied.

And now I get to cry myself to sleep! Damn you! ::sniff sniff::

... I didn't mean it! ::hugs Zoo:: I like the ficcie, I do, but I'm still so sad that you had to kill him! ::cry cry:: Whah-haaaah-haaah!

Otherwise, very cool. I like the wings, I like the way that for the duels you've been using certain things from the TV version of the duel with that character, but also inventing your own version and outcomes. So, good fic.

::goes off to cry and wish she had a Bakura plushie::

::comes back, waves "Yami Bakura Wins" flag, and the waterworks start anew:: ;_;

Sam

Heh, now you've got me staying up past my bedtime to read more chapters!

hm. I take it that Bakura and Yuugi were dreaming the same dream?

There were 10 flowers? well, let's see... 4 inner senshi, 4 outers, and the Moonie herself... the tenth one... is it, perhaps, Mamo-chan? _

Sam