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TheFairyPrincessNinja-OcAbuser 12/9/11 . chapter 1
woo innuendo! loved it!
Vega1313 10/19/11 . chapter 1
hahahaha really loved it! the lame joke was really funny XDXD
Cardboard Bike 10/9/11 . chapter 1
I think it's good without the smut, detailing sex would likely have changed the mood and direction of the fic quite a bit. Sometimes less is more, ne?
BlackWolf202 5/26/11 . chapter 1
My mind has filled in all the blanks...about 4 times /
BigSister2 4/20/11 . chapter 1
Hilarious. This was so awesome.
TheEndofTag 3/18/11 . chapter 1
hahaha...i was wondering what happen. SO that was what happen to put Kakahsi in such an embrassing state. _ Hehehe. My favorite part will be about Naruto barging in to save Iruka. Hahaha! Too hilarious! Just love it!
Shadow Cat From Hell 3/12/11 . chapter 1
This was really cute, and very well written.

I love it!

Smut would've been a nice continuation, but I don't press for it because I am also no god at writing it :/
Roughdozer 3/10/11 . chapter 1
I very much enjoyed it! I had an evil laught about the naruto segment!
brukleflesche 3/10/11 . chapter 1
Envisioning Naruto busting in on them in flagrante gives me the giggles. Naruto's like, "I'm here to save you, sensei!" and- well, it's the beginning of a debacle, to say the least.

Thanks for sharing this with us!
Ryu Earth 3/10/11 . chapter 1
Funny! the whole lol/rofl/lmao to the mishaps of love making.

My favorite was the part with what happened with Naruto. He must have been scared for life. lol

Ending was brilliant too! the ideas that come forth... ;;
anon 3/10/11 . chapter 1
Supa cute :)
Lucca-Ace 3/10/11 . chapter 1
I do wish you could write smut. But your writing's still very very good without it. And I love how their relationship is always full of laughter. X3
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