 Mistreated and Forgotten 7/24/11 . chapter 15And here's the end to another great but sad story and what a good ending it was. I've quite enjoyed ready this, along with your other stories :) |
 JessicaStone134 7/19/11 . chapter 15Aw I'm sad this story is over but I'm glad it ended on such a happy note. The birth of baby Andrea will hopefully mend some of the gaps in Kerry's heart.
More stories soon please ;)
Jess xx |
 LightSpirit 7/18/11 . chapter 15Aaww it's all over, but what a great ending to a great story! :D:D
And in my interpretation, she says yes - why would Kerry not want to marry Smithy?
Well done Hols, well done - great chapter and great story! :D:D
xxxx |
 Mistreated and Forgotten 7/8/11 . chapter 14Such a sad chapter, it's good to read that Kerry is getting better and that those who deserve to be put away are. |
 JessicaStone134 7/7/11 . chapter 14Aw what a beautiful chapter! The song alone makes me wanna cry, never mind the emotional depiction of the death of Andrea and it's aftermath.
Simply wonderful, and I can't wait for the last chapter :D
Jess xx |
 LightSpirit 7/6/11 . chapter 14Aaww that was sad! :(:(
But good to know that Kent's getting locked up, that Kerry's getting better with Taylor and she and Smithy managed to start again. :)
Great chapter Hols; can't wait to see what's still to come. ;):) |
 Mistreated and Forgotten 6/11/11 . chapter 13Whoa! I did so not see that one coming. Poor Andrea :(:(
Well done to Smithy for saving Kerry from he who's name is not worth mentioning and for getting her the help she needs.
Good job on this chapter and the previous, can't wait for more :) |
 JessicaStone134 6/10/11 . chapter 13Oh my God I did not see that coming! Why couldn't you have killed Kerry? Poor Andrea :(
Absolutely fab as usual, thank God Gabriel, or David, is gonna get what's coming to him!
Jess xx |
 LightSpirit 6/10/11 . chapter 13NO! ANDREA! :(:(:(:(:(
Aaww this chapter was so touching! First Kerry getting diagnosd with PND and then Andrea dying! :(:(:(
Aaww Hols, well done at such a sad and partly sweet chapter! :'(;'(
Please update soon! |
 JessicaStone134 6/8/11 . chapter 12Ah, Kerry is found at last! Such a shame she hurt herself...not!
At least Andrea and the baby were ok, looks like they were found in the nick of time!
I can't wait to read the conclusion to this brilliany story!
Jess xx |
 LightSpirit 6/7/11 . chapter 12Oh boy! :S:S
Kerry, why didn't you just talk to Smithy at your house? Please don't let things be awkward for too long!
And poor Andrea; nice that she and Taylor survived. :):)
Great chapter Hols; update soon! ;):) |
 Mistreated and Forgotten 6/1/11 . chapter 11Even with everything that's going on in this chapter it doesn't feel crowded, good job. :)
Oh and I hope Andrea and Taylor come out of this alive :) |
 JessicaStone134 6/1/11 . chapter 11I could've sworn I reviewed the last chapter! My bad lol
Anyway, so much drama and action, unbelieveable how much you've crammed in, but it doesn't feel like it's too much, if that makes sense? I feel bad for Kerry, not being able to love her baby, but I suppose the circumstances of the birth made sure of that!
Let's hope Andrea isn't felled by fire...again lol
Loved it!
Jess xx |
 LightSpirit 5/31/11 . chapter 11OMG! :O:O
How many deaths are we going to have? One, two or none?
Oh I hope Andrea makes it out safely with Taylor... or will Kerry go back in and help?
Well whatever the case, I hope they'll be okay! :S:S
Thanks very much Hols - can't wait for the next chapter! :):) |
 LightSpirit 5/22/11 . chapter 10Uh-oh! :S:S:S
Oh no, no, no, no! Please tell me they make it out alive! :(:(
And Andrea is Taylor's guardian? Didn't see that one coming!
Oh boy Bubbles, you have to update as soon as possible!
Great work! :D:D |