Hey man! Great story, I wish you would make others like these. Well, I guess thats it! Keep up the great writings, and I mean that!

oh, you write sooo good! i love it! i love it! i love it!

One of the most difficult things to do as a writer is to create a story from multiple viewpoints and still remain cohesive as a story, especially whin you have to create a distinctive voice for everyone in the story. One reviewer suggested that you tile each chapter after the particular character, but that's not really necessary because the person sspeaking is clearly obvious (especially Kuno). That's how accomplished the story is.

Really cool.

You shouls relabel the chapters to show what character is expressingtheir views though.