Just a question...what the heck does this have to do with A Little Princess?

This is really good but it's a little hard on the eyes of whoever's reading this because it's two big paragraphs with text that's bunched close together. You'd do a lot better if the text were divided up into smaller paragraphs and have at least two of three chapters. That would reduce the eye strain of people who want to read this fic to find out what it's about.