  Belladova Angel of Mercy and Death 9/3/00 . chapter 1 Okay I don't usually do this but *pushes the flamer mode button* What was that! All the typos, Charmeleonmon? What The &&*( was that? Grrr it had soo many typos I almost died laughing... *GRRRRRR I hate Michi!* Mimi is meant for Matt and Sora is meant for Tai..., I don't care if you hate me but this fic really pissed me off! |
| Totoro 9/3/00 . chapter 1 GOOD WORK SONNY JIM RIGHT MORE PLEASE! |
| Brendy 9/3/00 . chapter 1 DAMN!
*laughs as Jealousmon slowly slaughters Sora* YAHOO!
DING DONG THE WITCH IS DEAD! Make a Mimato or a Michi part to you fic. Or put a Yolei/Ken part.
You spelt Miyako's name wrong it's 'Yolei' not 'Yolie'...Could you make Mimi not seem so bad? I mean she is very nice and you made her looks like insincere person... |
| Getzo 9/3/00 . chapter 1 good story/series
i would spellcheck for you thats how bad you need it i am serious |
| ZellyBaby 9/3/00 . chapter 1 too many mistakes, too mushy, and why would matt and mimi be so jealous of tai and sora? and who the hell is ponymon? |
| Seiitsu 9/3/00 . chapter 1 kawaii! loved it! Seii |
| TAVREEM 9/3/00 . chapter 1 OK! |
| Alpha Draconis 9/3/00 . chapter 1 Hey pal, ever heard of spell check? Or grammar? Or even punctuation? |
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