 Mimssio 11/8/11 . chapter 1Oh, this fic. It reads like a lullaby being sung, soft and low, warm and sweet. And maybe he made her up when he was twenty-one, but he found her once more when he was all grown up. And they could've met a thousand and one times before they did, and it wouldn't have been right. Oh, crap, maybe it would've. And they could've changed the whole damn outcome. And now I'm sad. But it's a good kind of sad, so please keep writing. |
 Helpatemporaryidentitycrisis 8/6/11 . chapter 1Oh your parks and recs fics... The way you write Ben is stunning... So hurt and angsty and just so angry at himself- and I love what you did with his parents here.
"When I was twenty-one, I made you up."
What a stunning end. |
 brainchild 6/5/11 . chapter 1So romantic. And I never fail to love the way you make his stint as mayor so much MORE than a joke. Such a character defining moment. And that idea, that he saw all his mistakes and was unwilling to let them slide. That there was a fraud investigation because of the story he saw so easily in the numbers... that he toppled a founding family... LOVE. |
 voxterra 5/13/11 . chapter 1Oh, wow. That was beautifully written. I love the way you intertwined their pasts. Very enjoyable fic :) |
 Nobodyspecial 4/26/11 . chapter 1 Oh my goodness. This is absolutely perfect in every way |
 LunaMystik 4/25/11 . chapter 1This was beautiful. How intertwined they were, and still are, made for a very emotional read. |
 ibelieveintruelove 4/18/11 . chapter 1Beautiful. Just absolutely beautiful. I loooooove what you do with this couple :) Excellent job! |
 Finalesmith 3/26/11 . chapter 1 Perfection :) |
 writergirl89 3/24/11 . chapter 1Cute. |
 singyourmelody 3/24/11 . chapter 1Just, so so good. I loved every part of it, from their individual histories to their shared ones to the current storylines. It was just perfect. Thank you for writing their characters so well. |
 SLynn 3/24/11 . chapter 1I love this fic. It is perfect! |
 DeepBlueQL 3/21/11 . chapter 1 This story is really amazingly sweet. I think it takes a lot of talent to be able to take characters that are normally presented in only a comedic fashion and turn them into fully flushed people.
Great job! |
 ponderer 3/20/11 . chapter 1This was lovely. The growing relationship between Leslie and Ben warms my heart every week, and this was a nice piece to read in between episodes!
Nice job! |
 Seven Loves You So Much 3/11/11 . chapter 1Wow! This was amazing! I love Ben and Leslie, and I just love how you wrote this! Amazing job! |
 Mindy Watson 3/11/11 . chapter 1Very very nicely done :) |