YOU PIECE OF MOTHA FUCKIN SHIIIITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT

YOU SUCK

YOU SUCK

YOU SUCK

TOBI IS A GOOD BOY!

AND YOU ARE A DISGRACE!

I really enjoy the story and your style of writing I will be looking forward to chapter sixteen! Please excuse the rant above and do not take any of it to heart! I love you very much!

Oh... My... Scary... I love it! xDDD

Omg ! Let me at him-grabs knife-I'll make madara suffer if he touch tobi!

O_O

Woah the suspense in this chapter is maddening. Why did Zetsu and Madara kidnap Tobi. Will they be able to find Tobi at all? What does Madara have in store for Tobi and Zetsu really... And most of all, if Tobi's been kidnapped... Then will they have to call the Uchiha Police force to help?

Well please continue :D

Omfg !I just shat bricks! Nooooo I kill madara myself of he hurts tobi!

Omg !

Poor Zetsu-san D':

He thought Madara was a nice guy but didn't expect anything of the sort that he would be the total opposite. He should have listened to Itachi first before stabbing him to death... Literally... o_O

Well it was still an awesome chapter either way. For some reason I don't mind the characters being ooc :D

Nooooooo! Not madara! :( i love this story but the anticipations killing me. will everything turn out alright for zetsu? i love your work! keep going!

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Madara is quite abusive towards Zetsu in a lot of ways, but I think it's a mental illness that he has. He sounded so possessive of Zetsu when he figured out that they knew each other. Something that I think he himself was just a fearful of in a jealous way. But still, that's no excuse for treating Zetsu like dirt, especially sense the young man has been with him for this long even after taking the abusive ways and rape from Madara :(

I feel sorry for Zetsu. I know he loves Madara but in this kind of situation it's very life threatening. Some of the things Madara said sounds like he was going to kill him. And those bruises... I think the best option for Zetsu is to leave that man alone until he can get his head straight D:

Love this chapter, and I can't wait to hear... Or um read Zetsu's past, about how he and Madara got together :)

I love Konan in this chapter x)

The whole mother thing for her part was very funny, and it only got funnier when Tobi called Pein/Pain Lightning rod LOLZ XD

... But Damn... What is Zetsu doing there O.O

Well guess I'll find out in the next episode... Opps I mean chapter lol xD

Hm. I'm glad Pein/Pain is with Itachi and the others now. If you think about it, it's like a reunion or something. Which is kind of odd lolz, but still sweet XD

But... I am a little worried about Zetsu. I mean when I read it, it seemed he was quite troubled, both mentally and physically. And those bruises (shivers). I have read the sequel to this though, so maybe I have a pretty good idea of who it might be ;)

All in all love this chap. Please continue when ever your feeling better :D

In response to your message, thank you, I try to review as much as I can, because I know it makes people happy to read them.

Anyways, on to the actual review. I like the character development with Deidara. It's interesting to see him change gradually throughout the story.

Of course, I'm wondering what'll happen with Sasuke, which is a good thing.

I know you'll have an amazing ending, as you always do. XD

Loved it :3