Aw! Adorable! Very cute!

Awww this was cute, although really kinda sad at the same time :( Poor Fye :( You write Kurogane's feelings really well - very believable! And cute idea all together and funny! But... I-I... want you to write more happy/lovey-dovey/supreme fluff! Kurofye *lusts*

Very cute, thank you for sharing! :D

i like your fic.

onions, it's a good idea! they can make my eyes sting too.

:)

Awww...cute!

*Shock*

No fluff? Waii.

But stil... KUROFAI!

You're really good at keeping them in character