Last review for my challenge. I liked this one and the quotes were really nice and interesting. The story is somewhat sudden and not much transitions.

Lol.

This is pretty pointless. I can see the lyrical side of this you were attempting to portray, however, you failed immensely.

This is badly written, moves much too quickly, obviously unedited, and suffers from a bad case of dumb author-itis.

Delete this shit.

i want to read more plzz continue the story i think it will turn out very good!

You should continue this story, it's cool so far. I'd like to see how Annabeth would react in this storyline.