Some typo errors, but really nice.

Wow so many chapters! :D You put such a good effort in. I am so impressed! You wrote the story line really well, and added in eveyones favourite characters. I am glad you did a fanfiction about Niccolo!

more lily and niccolò pleaaase :3

Also, I forgot to mention that you also should double check your work to get rid of grammatical errors on top of getting a beta tester.

No, no, no, no, no! Machiavelli is incredibly OOC. He promised never to remarry. Also, Lily is a Mary Sue. Given Machiavelli's actions during the series, if he did not mention his wife, I would have easily believed he was asexual. Get a beta tester. They help. I don't mean to sound harsh; this is not a flame, just constructive criticism.

So glad you're updating again.

The new chapters were good.
Though the last chapter's last part made me wonder... i wonder what their reactions would be? I'll be waiting for the next one :)

It was worth it :D
Did I mention that I really love the part with the unicorns? :D

Not bad, not bad at all. I just finished the enchantress today. Thought some of Abraham's letters were a bit too detailed, but not bad.

Oh my god, I lobe this chapter! I've been reading this story since the beginning and it's only getting better! Though I would like to see some more Lily/Machiavelli action if you know what I mean. Please update soon, it is one of my favorite stories!

That was a nice idea to give Niccolo and Billy a tablet! :D
I wonder what will happen in the future...

Hey I just came across this story and I love it! Ive had a small story of Machiavelli ,an OC and a crossover but lost the taste for it recently but this story is just amazing :) can't wait for more!

Hahahaha! The Lotan is now an egg

Seagulls are very useful :3

Great! Great! Great!

Maybe a good reunion would be good?