|Reviews for Halo and JLU: A New Fight|
| halo-fan 117 3/16/11 . chapter 4
I think the onyx spartans should come and put Jorge the more the merirer spartan weay.
| Guest 3/16/11 . chapter 4
I think the onyx spartans should come
| CISfan 3/14/11 . chapter 3
Chief/Kelly? If it happens, you will have my gratitude.
| Kurogane7 3/14/11 . chapter 3
You've updated quickly...interesting...I'd like to see what happens at the end of the cliffhanger...so do keep this up would you kindly?
| Jacob 3/13/11 . chapter 2
Good update. I like fight scenes, it was good and an excellent way for the League to let Chief join. It has brought a few things in mind
1. Chief might need a jet pack or something for a flight ability, besides a pelican.
2. Will there be any pairings in this story? Will Johnson, Miranda, and Cortana get a pairing?
3. Does Chief's armour have other abilites like armor lock, drop shield, hologram?
4. Will Chief reveal his origins to a few people?
5. Do you plan on involving anymore Halo characters like the Spirit of Fire, Spartans on Onyx, Jorge, Nicole, the Arbiter?
That is all for now, this is a great story just I hope you do something about that immortality thing, anyway I hope you answer some of my questions like the pairing, and update soon.
| inuboy86 3/13/11 . chapter 1
Well this is interesting, please keep it going and update soon.
| halo-fan 117 3/13/11 . chapter 1
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| Harbinger Of Kaos 3/12/11 . chapter 1
i dont know how youll take my opinion, so i will voice that the whole immortality deal did not sit well with me, mostly because you efectively elimanated Terry from existing and because in the episode where he took a dip in the Lazarus pit left him feeling like he is cheating, so please think this through.
But your story your rules, the armor and bringing back two of the fan favorites back was okay.
You are taking a bit of a risk in regard to using the Bale portrayal of Batman as i am pretty sure he would have dated Diana from the start, but again your story.
I am no saying you should stop, just think everything through, every reaction and consecuence, thats what i do when i write this stories, especially my Halo cross, i read it at least three times before publishing to make sure the flow is just right. Still i am glad someone else is getting involved, and that i had somehow inspired you to write this.
| Jacob 3/12/11 . chapter 1
It pretty good, some similarites to Freedom and Harbinger but still good. With Chief having immortality this kinda tells me it's going to be Wonder Woman and Master Chief pairing which I really hope it is they would be a great couple. The thing with Batman finding immortality is a little much, how can Batman make it if he is in the 21st century with way lower tech? So basically I agree with Josh on the immortality and the Justice League. And yes I am voting for Master Chief and Wonder Woman pairing if you decide to a pairing.
| Max 3/12/11 . chapter 1
I'm glad to see someone else is doing this crossover, it has alot of potential.
| Jason 3/12/11 . chapter 1
Cool, but I think to whole immortality thing is a bit much. I get that the idea of the Chief and Batman living forever is appealing, but is it really necessary to the plot? Unless this story is going to go all the way to the Batman Beyond timeline, it really shouldn't make much difference to the plot. I feel like the Chief and Batman living forever changes the tone of the story.
| Kurogane7 3/12/11 . chapter 1
Different from HarbingerofKaos and FreedomGuard...it's interesting to see your take on this crossover...and so you have my subscription. I'm only sorry that there's not enough Halo-Marvel crossovers out there.