Reviews for Random Times
Mademise 9/30/11 . chapter 5
What, being considerate is considered out of character for him? Gods, but that's sad.

Mademise Morte
Mademise 9/30/11 . chapter 4
The tenses are a little odd.

This might to better with a less dramatic song lyric to text ratio...

Mademise Morte
Mademise 9/30/11 . chapter 3
Goodbye, fourth wall. You will be missed.

Mademise Morte
Mademise 9/30/11 . chapter 2
Your punctuation with regards to dialogue could do with some work.

She takes love very lightly, doesn't she?

Mademise Morte
Mademise 9/30/11 . chapter 1
I could mention the typos, but all things considered, you're probably at the very least aware of them...

Mademise Morte
yapyap 9/29/11 . chapter 61
Woot! They got married! I was worried there for a moment, when Fletcher barged in... so glad that he came to his senses.
Pirrip 9/27/11 . chapter 55
You know, this sounds like something I would actually do. The coffee... The randomly rolling around on the floor... The setting fire to the house... ;)
yapyap 9/27/11 . chapter 60
Hee, Val must have quite some self-control, if she could still think about picking out dresses with Skul there and clearly interested!
yapyap 9/26/11 . chapter 59
Her parents took it really well. It must have been a relief to Val and Skul!
yapyap 9/26/11 . chapter 57
Oooh! Yay! He proposed! And she said yes! loves

I wonder if they're going to invite her parents/family, too... :D
yapyap 9/25/11 . chapter 55
Awkward situations are always so good for bringing those two together. :D

"Try not to catch the house on fire... again!" - heeee! Yes, always a danger when one goes around throwing fireballs at everything!
Awesomeness 9/25/11 . chapter 54
ahh sisterly love heheheee I liked t that was really good keep it up ppppllleeeaaassseee
yapyap 9/25/11 . chapter 54
I love plotting Ghastly and Tanith! And I love Tanith being back with Ghastly. Lots of happy times all around. :D
Pirrip 9/25/11 . chapter 9
WOOP! 19th of March is my birthday! IT MUST BE A SIGN! o
Pirrip 9/25/11 . chapter 8
Trys not to obsessively read fanfiction... Fails. Bad.

Great Fanfiction. :) xx
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