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samantha 3/11/12 . chapter 11
you know ,you really butchered it made me feel so 's just sick! cutting him open to take out the anal beads? wtf? I never read any fanfiction like that before. is there any chance he's going to ever have his eyes back again? honestly i regretted reading this fic. and for the eyes or sharingan to be transferred,they do not need to gouge his eyes out! all the doctor have to do is take the retina or what you looks like a contact lense. that is what really the doctor only takes from the dead the whole eyes. and why do sasuke still wants to go home?if i were him,i'd rather kill my self/sucide. than go home and be pitifull and blind my whole life.
samantha 3/11/12 . chapter 6
i hate it when you make sasuke act without even thinking, what makes him think he can save sakura in his conditon all by himself. without even kakashi or any planning? that's so very annoying, and pathetic. for god's sake he was "ninja" the least he could have is common sense. and this is what makes you'r story- so makes me wan't to stop reading.i my self have a fetish for torturing and abusing sasuke."but i will never make his personality so far from his real self"
narutofan 9/20/11 . chapter 11
This story is really well described( at some parts at little to much :p ), I really feel sorry for Sasuke. The story is brutal, so it is really good that you have that warning, children really should not read this ;)

The development about Itachi seems to grow, in this chapter he seems to at least care a little for Sasuke but he really is a bastard for the fact that he is actually doing this. I really don't see Itachi as this type of person, but I must say you have done him to someone I actually can hate.

Great job and hope you update soon :)
Evil E. Evil 6/14/11 . chapter 11
wow
Ichibel 5/28/11 . chapter 11
Awe, you really left me confused here :/
Ichibel 5/28/11 . chapter 9
I love this game
Ichibel 5/28/11 . chapter 7
Haha Sasuke really screwed himself over XD.
Ichibel 5/28/11 . chapter 6
Not a Sakura fan at all so personally good for her! I like. The idea though. Gonna read the next chap :)
00-night-eyes-00 5/28/11 . chapter 11
love it looking forward to more.
sound-sasuke 5/28/11 . chapter 11
Waah! It's getting so exciting! I love it! I just hope you don't put it off for so long that you lose interest in this story... because it's freakin' awesome and I want it to keep going! :'

Great job! Please continue it!
ilovemiax 5/28/11 . chapter 11
*sniff* poor Sasuke... in a way I feel bad 4 Itachi too... Nice update :)
ainsel-3 5/27/11 . chapter 11
Itachi is the master of love distorted, the worst thing is for sure in his own way he loves "really" Sasuke u_u

I hope that Sakura is well and that she will soon find help, or I think it could be too late for Sasuke...
Always-Unpredictable 5/27/11 . chapter 11
This is awesome! I love your freaky fetish for blind Sasuke, it's awesome! (But really sad) :(
KokoroNoIro 5/27/11 . chapter 11
Waaaa! I don't wanna wait! And just when the things got interesting!

I guess I'll have to...ó.ò

Please keep it up and update your fabulous work as soon as possible!
Darkflower93 5/27/11 . chapter 11
Another one, another one XD
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