AH!! Please write more, I loved it!! It was really awesome.

i loved it! magenta and riff his most trusted servants..........i'd hate to see his least trusted! it was awesome! how's about some more, eh?

That's amazing... you deserve more reviews.. I'd reveiw this a thousand times if I could.. but I can't, and it'd become pretty damn repetitive.. I'm not THAT origonal. I lurve this story though... I wish you had continued this.

::cough:: Should I be saying that was weird? It was, it was short, never would I call that bad at all-because it was beautiful and all but...weird way...I don't know...

that was so kool, i loved the way u rote it. i'll look forward to reading more :->

HOOPLA! That rocked. I laughed like a little kid at the end, it was so great! I loved the way you wrote it, especially the part about Columbia being able to hear Magenta's eyes open halfway across the castle. Gorgeous.
~Becca

This is *fabulous*! Admittedly I'm partial to Frank stories, but that's not the only reason I love it...it's beautifully written. Kudos!