 no-name-brand 9/8/04 . chapter 2 look, your story may be good but this whole thing in your summary 'I don't even know why i update. No one reviews' that is just not good at all! I mean honestly, it makes you sound like your on your high horse expecting reviews to come pouring in like theres going to be no tomorrow, that is not nice at all!, so what if no one reviews, I once read a story that had 10 chapters and not a single review, do you think that writer gave up, of course not, you, on the other hand have only got 2 chapters out and are already complaining about no reviews, think about it, I have stories up in Fictionpress and have no reviews but Im not going to let that get me down, no way. so do us a favour, get rid of that self pity message from your profile, it wont do you good in the long run. |
 Klipee 12/13/02 . chapter 2 You should mae another chapter. I know that it's been awhile but I just found this so... Well, I think you should continue. |
 Morbid Muse 11/21/02 . chapter 2Very different story... I like it! I hope you write more. |
 Paige L. H 10/1/02 . chapter 2 What an interesting concept you're playing on, here! You have a very clear and precise style of writing that gets the story across in an enjoyable way. I'm looking forward to more! |
 wanda 5/6/02 . chapter 2 I am very curious to knoiw who is Samantha and hope you will write a other chapter very soon |
 Susan 3/30/02 . chapter 2 I really enjoyed this story! I've been both suicidal and addicted to drugs and I know how it feels. You've captured it very well! I'm in recovery now just like Carter. |
 kattancs 3/30/02 . chapter 1 The fact that no-one made a rewiev doesn't mean that no-one reads it and no-one likes it:) Cos we do. I like the tought of someone being at Carter's side at the whole time, it would be great if you continue. |
 amanda 3/30/02 . chapter 1 oh my god I love your fanfictions. I hope you can continue. Sincerly Amanda |
 Jane McCartney 3/30/02 . chapter 2Now you can update again. Uh, please? This is interesting. Curious, different. I love stories about Carter's turns into drugs. Please, try and continue this topic - which I don't think you'll. I thought John was some sort of Paul, really. He was delusional and stuff. Is he? Now, that'd be interesting too. Oookay, that's your fic. I won't say what you've to do again, sorry! Unless you don't write soon. Don't you dare. |
 Princess Lollipop 3/30/02 . chapter 2Okay, to make you feel better, i'll review. i love this fic and if you find it in your heart to write more, i'll read and review again. |