 A Hundred Planes 3/16/12 . chapter 5I don't care how long you want me to wait, PLEASE CONTINUE THIS! PLEASE. I BEG YOU! TTTT
I want to know if he ever regains the memories, or if he makes new ones. |
 TripOverFlatSurfaces 2/20/12 . chapter 5Ryoma is so cute and vulnerable (like a bunny!) but it's not Ryoma anymore... Will he ever gain his memories back? I look forward to Chapter 6 |
 Sasorilicious 1/9/12 . chapter 5hmm i like it.. |
 cfaithcsf 11/30/11 . chapter 5Its really well written. Although,there is someone from Rokkaku who played Echizen, Aoi Kentarou. Both teams still went on the Nationals. I hope to see this continued |
 drippinghoney 8/28/11 . chapter 5This is so exciting! I actually never thought of this scenario, and this fic was the first that i've found that took on this AU idea. I can't wait to find out how Yukimura's going to fix the problem (if he is at all), and how Ryoma's going to get his memory back. Thanks for writing! |
 Akua 5/28/11 . chapter 5This is a pretty cool take on the 'what if' factor. Amnesia stories are always my favorite for this series. I like how you emphasize Ryoma's 'injury', so to speak. How it affects and changes everyone around him and especially himself. I really like this and can't wait to know more. And to see more of Yukimura and if Ryoma eventually goes back to tennis.
Ayaa.. I can't wait. :3
-Akua |
 netglow 4/29/11 . chapter 5Oh! This is so interesting, I really like it.
I can't wait for the next chapter: Looks like there is some Sanada vs. Yuki, hm? |
 Fairy5706green 4/9/11 . chapter 5Good Chapter. Its werid, I read this chapter before watching Tenimuyu: Advancement Match Rokkaku and while watching it I heard two songs (Seasons and Try Again Seigaku)that reminded me of the chapter and wave of ideas came to me of what could happen in the next chapters. Then again with amensia there are so many things you can do. So many possibilities.
I love all the reactions from all the rival teams. I like when POT writers do this, because it shows broader picture of the POT universe because one life can reflect on many. Some writer's fail to see this.
Also are you using the manga events instead of the anime? Because in the anime Ryoma played against Aoi(Rokkaku) instead of Kaidou in the manga. I didn't know this because I never read the manga.
I can't wait to see what you do next. Does Yukimura have a plan to help the one he crushed?
Keep Writing!
Greenfairy |
 Frenchowl 4/9/11 . chapter 5Loved it! |
 marie 4/9/11 . chapter 5 kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! great! great! great! D i loved "No, he still refuses to come to tennis practice. . He seems to be avoiding us" its wow! please! please! next chapter! please! and Yukimura! i cuestion ¿its story is yaoi? sorry, but i know yes xdd (yep, my english in very very bad D) but read xdd bye bye! i wait for next chapter D you are great! |
 Yoruko Rhapsodos 4/9/11 . chapter 5This isn't fair. Does ANYONE care about poor Ryoma beyond the fact that he can't/won't play tennis? |
 demoncat13 4/9/11 . chapter 5I doubt anyone in St. Rudolph would agree with Mizuki. damn now I wanna know what everyone in Rikkai is thinking. and did you have to leave an evil cliffhanger? |
 Alpha14 4/9/11 . chapter 2Until Yukimura Seiichi came to his door... O.O |
 Fadey 4/9/11 . chapter 5This chapter was amazing. I love how you manage to put emotion into your words, it's really beautiful
I hope that you will update soon, I can't wait to see what happens between Yukimura and Sanada.
Fadey |
 violetkisses 4/9/11 . chapter 5Aaaah, Great great great! I'm reaaaalllly excited for the next. |