very sweet! love the "sunkissed"! perfectly intimate moments between them. really nice.

For your first Tiva story this was amazing! I just love them together. Feel bad that Ziva couldn't trust Tony but she has had a lot of guy issues so she gets a pass for now. Glad Tony gave her some space but also that he came to find her. I didn't know that about the hair. Hope to see more from you soon! Thanks!

Loved it :)

Wow. Loved this so much. I love how you write Tony and Ziva together. They are so sweet and adorable. I really hope to see more from you about Tiva cause you're so good at it! Also, as a redhead I get some strawberry-blonde hair during the summer. Silly Ziva! My brunette friend used to use blonde shampoo to bring out her natural highlights and it looked so pretty.

This was awesome. Your writing is fantastic and I loved the little plot idea for this. And you wrote both the characters beautifully!