I loved your story :) it was quite lovely

This is the best Ever After Fic I've read. No contest. It's well written, had great grammar and spelling, and is impossible to stop reading. I also loved the notes at the beginning explaining things - A lot of fanfiction authors (and readers) don't seem to research/know about all that, and it shows in their writing, and yours is all the better for it.

I also thank you for finishing it - a lot of Ever after fanfics are left unfinished.

So thankyou.

What a lovely story. I think its brilliant. Wonderfully written. Ever after is my favorite book/movie, and i believe you've done a most fantastic job writing 'In Pursuit of Ever After'. It should be published as a sequel to the original. Excellent work!

That was wonderful, you should definately write an epilouge!

ohhhh :) i like the story to the baby! :) nice ending

yay! heir :) and i liked the part about georg at the end. he took her hat :) muhahah

hahahah :) georgs in love with her too! :D of course! how could he not be?

muhahahah :) the comte de barbarac! :D yayyyy! i liked the reffernce to the day danielle dreesed up as the comtesse too :)

oh noes! nightmares D:

ahah! :) this is very good. hahah "love and laughter and children" :)

muhahahah! :D nicole and the marquis! and maurgerite and gustave :)

yayyyy :) rescued and healthy! another amazing chapter

oh noes! D:

ahhhh! a baby! a prince? ;) and rodmilla escapes! a twist! :D brilliant.

hahah she lost her slipper! again! :) haha i love how she went to the wedding anyway. and the birdcage thing was brilliant. i also loved the butterfly brooch.