 1life2ROCK 5/23/12 . chapter 1so good. my is crusehd for both of them |
 Rokimbo 3/30/12 . chapter 1Wow. The tension just kept building in this story until by the end, I was ready to snap! Amazing job, but very sad for my fav couple. Damn Avery on line 1! :-( |
 tortue0711 3/17/11 . chapter 1Ahhh! This was great! The tension is so thick you could cut it will a knife! XD I was getting a little teary-eyed at the end. Poor Liz, there always is something in the way between her and Jack. It is sad. :'( I just hope they can both have there happy ending. |
 KDTB 3/15/11 . chapter 1okay so this 1. made me cry and 2. is exactly how i think these two would act if these scenes existed on 30 Rock. |
 bean4green 3/14/11 . chapter 1 please please please tell me you are going to consider this! This is like the ending that never happened from the one ep! |
 Steeleafan 3/14/11 . chapter 1 OH no. |