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Reviews for The Siege of The Pyramid
Guest 7/5/12 . chapter 1
Goth can't read! So funny! Good story, nice moral.
VioletVendetta363 6/7/12 . chapter 1
I loved the humor at the beginning LOOOOOOOOLLLLLLL...So funny... Check your grammar and spelling though, you have quite a few mistakes...Good humor and funny story overall.