|Reviews for The Siege of The Pyramid|
| Guest 7/5/12 . chapter 1
Goth can't read! So funny! Good story, nice moral.
| VioletVendetta363 6/7/12 . chapter 1
I loved the humor at the beginning LOOOOOOOOLLLLLLL...So funny... Check your grammar and spelling though, you have quite a few mistakes...Good humor and funny story overall.