This is a good way to start a story. Can't WAIT to see what happens with Cutie and Mouth, lol. But, anyways, PLEASE HURRY and UPDATE SOON!

who does mouth have a crush on? Is it andy...

Good job, please write more

Uh...this is the essentially the actual movie word for word. Only difference is that you added a Mary Sue with this "Cutie" character. Lame. Try to be more original please.

write more soon

hey, like it so far. please write more. tanks

So far, I really like this story! I like the idea of having some more Goonies, and especially girl goonies (Since, as far as I can tell, Andy and Stef weren't really OFFICIAL Goonies)But I see you started this about 2 months ago, and haven't updated, so I'm HOPING u'll continue and update soon. But so far, for a chapter one, you got me hooked!

Love your story so far! It's great, I can't wait to read more! I always thought it would be cool to have a younger girl goonie :)

awwww I LOVE the goonies! Goonies Never Say Die! . I really like your story! please please please update soon! i'm liking that you're bringing new characters,, but are you gonna still put the same couples as in Brand&Andy (obviously) but what about Mouth&Stef? :( anyways update soon! :)