This is amazing. I've read many, many books in my life, and plan on reading a lot more (I've still got a ways to go). I've always been fascinated by books, and the way they could make you feel like you were there. It's interesting, in a psychological way. And this short story actually scared me. I've been to Aokigahara (I visited Japan last year with a group of friends), my friend thought it would be an quote-unquote "interesting" place to visit. In case you were wondering, my friends are insane. So don't ask. We went during the daytime (I'm deathly afraid of the dark, can't go to sleep without some light. Please stop laughing), but due to my overactive imagination, it was really easy for me to visualize the situation of your story in my head. If I went through something like that, I would probably be insane right now.

That was weird. Don't worry I watch those types of shows as well. Ofcourse he was creeped out I would be. But after I read this I stopped for a minute. I had to laugh poor Shinichi. Do those boys have a magnet on the for trouble. I mean I don't think I have seen anyone get in as much trouble as them. Good story looking forward to more. See ya

I loved this. It was creepy and mysterious and spine-chilling and beautiful and fantastic and aoshdsjdsihfskjll 3 I love your Friends!KaiShin universe. Thank God you're planning to continue making some side stories :')

Can't wait for the next several (thousands. lol) side stories! :)

You updated this! *does the happy dance* And you intend to continue this series! *does the happy striptease* That's fantastic news! I really do love this mini-series universe of sorts, and I have to say, both the first and the second had marvelously executed cases, espcially Plans, with the serial killer. This one seemed to be going the same way, but I have to admit that I loved the alternative take on things...Even Kudo Shinichi can suffer from spectres of the mind!

I look forward to more from this corner of the Shinichi-Kaito friendship universe. I think the reason why I probably prefer Plans over the first story is his interaction with Shinichi, and the lovely hit and miss element you had going for their dynamic (Though there isnt nearly enough Kaito/Aoko interaction around, so the first story's ending is particularly sweeter! Shinichi and Ran suffer the same neglect unfortunately).

Either way, thank you! I look forward to more lovely things from you! take care and be safe!

Oooh I like this story. It has Kaito and Shinichi and creepiness! Wonder whats going to happen to Shinichi. Please continue this story with more creepiness, I like those kinds of stories. They fill me with suspense and when I finish a chapter I'm left with chills. UPDATE SOON! Thanks!

I love your story line! Please come up with a sequel soon! I am looking forward to read it!

Well, actually, the ending is kinda abrupt - but then again, I suppose that it's rather understandable, given that you're planning to continue.

Great work on this chapter, by the way! Not quite sure if that's what you wanted to get across, but this came through as being somewhat mysterious yet plausible. Plus it doesn't actually interfere and completely chuck Shinichi's innate logic out the window, as some tend to do. I like

Hoping to see more from this universe soon :D good luck on your studies as well getting your jump-drive to cooperate!

Wow, this was great. I can't wait to read more stories set in this universe. Hope your jump drive doesn't play hide and seek again, I would be sad if you didn't post stories because of a little piece of plastic.

Oooh... creepy. I wonder if this series is going to get very supernatural...? After all, Toichi almost certainly saved Kaito before, and now Shinichi may or may not be seeing ghosts... cool :D

Honestly speaking, I think this collection has to be THE most awesome ones with Kaito and Shinichi... okay, maybe that's exaggerating it, but it's definitely one of the best. I really love how you handled their interactions - their differing personalities come through very clearly when they talk :D great work, and hope to see an update soon!

When do you plan on screwing with Shinichi? It's been 4 FREAKING MONTHS!

Oh Shinichi... He really CAN'T do anything without getting into some sort of trouble, now can he? At least it wasn't a body falling out of a sky this time. But wait, that only happens when he and Heiji are together... Unless that WAS Heiji and Kazuha he saw out the window when he asked what are THEY doing here!

Well..*sits patiently and strokes imaginary beard* it looks like our young detective has landed himself in quite a tight situation.*smirks*

I wonder what type of weird apparitions he will encounter..hmm..*evil smile* let's hope it makes him scream

Ah and you can count on me ta read da next chapter!*Who wouldn't?*

So..PLEASE UPDATE SOON! XD

*pokes story* Oh, this is dead, isn't it? :( I really love how you have Kaito and Shinichi working together - I will admit that this story line is my favourite of all the ones you have up for this reason - and I really looked forward for more, but ... is it ditched? If you need brainstorming, I offer myself up willingly. I'd very dearly like to see this lovely story line continued. These two together are gold - Kat Morning's spoiled me with her Moriarty Gambit, and now I can't seem to get enough of the Kuroba and Kodo show :D. If you need any help, or a wall to bounce things off, go ahead and contact me on . I'll be glad to lend a hand.

Meanwhile; I thank you for these very enjoyable snippets and well done on the Magician Murder case. It was appropriately chilling, serious, entertaining and equal parts Shinichi and Kaito. Seeing them further their friendship outside of 'professional' bounderies in this one tickled my happy bone, too. v Thank you very much, and good luck on your current work.

Very intruiging.

I Hope Shinichi gets out ok.

I cant help but think that Ran will find out Kaitos secret sometime soon.

I like guessing about what will happen later in a story.