OMG i loved it soo cute watched the film today love the ending :) xoxo

I have always loved fairy tales, especially with a moral lession. I liked your story very much!

Great job. Thanks for entering and good luck :)

Lovely. Wonderfully written. My only complaint was reading so much italics! I wonder if line breaks or a different style variant (makeing Real Life italics?) might alleviate eye-strain. That is really all I can critique, your story telling is beautiful and the real life children are adorable.