|Reviews for Persona: Untold story|
| WeeDevil 3/22/13 . chapter 6
| Have a Little Feith 1/28/13 . chapter 1
I think the name is Ekuda.
| Drake the Gunner 7/7/12 . chapter 6
Hey bro when are going to update this fic and your naruto/mana khemia fic?
| kalakauai 6/23/12 . chapter 2
What? Hey wait, What about Kurama Nine-tails
| kalakauai 6/23/12 . chapter 1
So, the Female MC is not Related to the Male MC?
| Mocca-Marocchi 12/5/11 . chapter 6
Nice chaaap I'm so sorry I read it so lately .
The Red Ranger... I think he uses a skill of Kamen Rider Double, doesn't he?
Minato's Keroro pink apron is cute I think it suits him
The scene of Hamuko and Minato's date is so funny! I love to see Naruto's Dynamic Entry! *LOL* I hope Lee won't be angry since his technique has been plagiarized...
The battle scene is great! I want moore
| Mzr90 12/2/11 . chapter 6
A good story neverheard of a p3/naruto crossover. Have u considered doin a harem for naruto if minato can then naruto should to.
| superecho 11/6/11 . chapter 6
This is REALLY good! Better than before yet again!
Poor Naruto... heheheh.
And the Justice Rangers of Growlanser was soooo coool!
Hamuko's winter clothes are almost right...
The black jeans is wrong. She wore light orange sweater (similar to cream but more orangish), a red checker skirt, black leggings, and red boots.
Plus, Hamuko is SUPER at cooking. At first just a little better than Minato, but far surpass him later when she joins Fuuka's Cooking CLub (really).
Nice scene with Junpei... Hamuko is pretty cute, too!
Whoa, weapon select scene! Very fresh!
I thought all of them picked their own weapon at Police Station...? For Junpei, at least. Yukaris hould've carry her own bow, Minato got the short sword from Yukari... Same with Hamuko.
But it's new and good! Yeah
The battle is pretty epic! Even Naruto need some backup, and Minato need to keep his cool at his best. Junpei is as stupid as usual though :3 Yukari is as helpful as ever.
Did I say that Seith was cool? But it seems he need more HP/SP cost, as Naruto is more beat than the others...
BTW, Hamuko is closer to Junpei than Minato (like how Minato best friends with Kenji) as he is her Magician S. Link.
Minato is a family guy? Never thought that...
I mean, he appreciate all of his friends, but most likely to watch and smile (while looked that he didn't care)
But overall this chapter rocks!
But I want more length or faster update, okay? XD
| Guest 11/5/11 . chapter 1
Can you please stick to one name when you saying the female protagonist's name, Hamuko preferably
| Dias of All Final 7/22/11 . chapter 5
Interesting idea. But please find a beta reader. There are so many typos.
| superecho 6/18/11 . chapter 5
Hahahaha! i love how Naruto try to act cool!
And using Jiraiya pose, of all that! Bravooo
And Hamukoalways make me smile! She's suh a klutz!
I also love how Naruto argued with Mitsuru in the end :3
But... Minato is getting darker and darker here...
In the game and manga he wasn't that mean...
BTW, 'nee-san' is used to call a big SISTER.
For big BROTHER, use 'nii-san' instead :(
But your story depth is progresing smoothly.
Nice work! :)
| Mocca-Marocchi 6/12/11 . chapter 5
Hmm... The story goes well so far
Naruto becomes as hard-boiled as in the original series! Very well
I'm curious with Naruto's past. It looks horrible .
Eee... Naruto x Mitsuru is a bit shocking for me .
Hamuko is sort of absent-minded here, but I love her characterization I like her when replying Ikutsuki's question, "You forgot to take your medication." Nice reply, Hamuko!
Another thing that tickles my curiosity: Minato said that Hamuko's personality is similar to "her"s. Who is "her", anyway?
| Cloves 6/7/11 . chapter 5
Lock and Loaded taichou! I'll shoot as many Yaoi soldiers as i can! *bratatatata* Anyway really glad that you updated it soon, i wonder how will you do this fic. are you going to follow the game by the team always going to the Tower or just like in the Manga focusing on the large Shadows.
| daniel 29 6/7/11 . chapter 1
By the way as of right now sometime in september the other persona 2 game called innocent sin will finally be in american shores but for the playstation portable
| Cloves 6/6/11 . chapter 4
I'll help you defend against the Yaoi empire. can't wait for chapter 4/5 it's really good it's really interesting mostly on how will Naruto and Mitsuru's relationship or friendship will develop :3