|Reviews for The Best Laid Plans: A Comedy of Errors in 3 Parts|
| KayDee 9/16/12 . chapter 4
I really loved Alice's point of view and surprisingly loved Alice and Jacob. I think I just love the way you write, another job very well done. Keep it up, please!
| mesmerizeme 4/16/11 . chapter 4
I loved how it all ended! That was a great prom and I loved Jake's character. I'm totally not a Jake fan... but you did awesome! And of course everyone else was great as well. I loved Tanya. haha Good riddance! :P Edward had definitely needed to get rid of her a long time ago. And doing something just to keep up appearances? Please, everyone was going to know they were over eventually, might as well get it over with now rather than later. Also, I'm sure her friends knew her plans, so tough luck. I guess now though she won't be able to change her story and say I broke up with him. - Well, maybe she still could ;) haha
Poor Alice's plans :P Though, the thing about plans... they never go how you plan them. haha I'm not sure it was a Friday the 13th thing, just Murphy's Law :P haha It all turned out fantastic though and everyone had a great time. And Alice got her boy at the end. And I rather liked it. I'm not an Alice as a main character fan either, but you did super and made me love it all! :) They are cute together. I am a Jasper/Bella fan, however, so I loved that pairing :)
That was a great prom! I quite enjoyed your story and I hope Jessica did as well! You did great hun! xo
| Rebadams7 4/4/11 . chapter 4
If only all proms could go so well!
| Professor Raye Starlite 3/31/11 . chapter 4
I did love it. It was brilliant and it had THE BEST EVER ENDING! 3
| readingmama 3/30/11 . chapter 4
Awwww, I love Alice and Jake together, I just love that pairing, I don't know why.
| KM525 3/30/11 . chapter 4
Finally, something put a smile back on my face today. Jake & Alice could be so cute together! Great story, brings back great memories of my own prom. Thanks!
| hln3twimom 3/30/11 . chapter 2
Alice's freak out cracked me up! I know it's bad, but it was quite funny to me.
| hln3twimom 3/30/11 . chapter 1
*eyes wide* I always wanted to go to a masquerade ball. I loved Alice's over the top planning :)
| lilsunnysaunt 3/29/11 . chapter 4
Wow! That was amazing. I am so glad that everything worked out for the Pixie in the end. I would have been a mess had all that happened to me. The guys' outfits-that is the funniest thing ever. I think I was laughing for a full five minutes on that. Even thinking about it now makes me chuckle. Great job! Thanks for sharing!
| lilsunnysaunt 3/27/11 . chapter 3
wow, Jake and Alice? Never thought of that combo. Alice's outfit sounds so cute! I can't wait to see how the rest of the prom plays out for her. I really like this story. It's really light and airy, flirty in it's own way. Thanks for sharing!
| mouse555 3/27/11 . chapter 3
oooh! I didn't expect it to be Jake. I wasthinking Ben!
Can't wait to read more!
| mouse555 3/27/11 . chapter 2
awww, Alice being all "if I can't have him, no-one can"
| mouse555 3/27/11 . chapter 1
ooh, I like the fac you mixed up the coupling when its a fic with them all
| mesmerizeme 3/26/11 . chapter 3
awwww I had a feeling her date was going to be Jake, but then I was worried you were going to hold off on telling us till next chapter as I started getting closer and closer to the bottom. LOL
That was great though. Awww I'm not a huge Jake fan, but he was sweet here. And I love the costume ideas. Very cool! The guys as the three musketeers is perfect! lol And so are Bella and Roses's outfits! You did great on them! And Alice and Jakes too! I'm excited for actual prom time now!
I'm not sure I could imagine prom committee.. haha all that setting up and tearing down.. and then still having to rush home to get ready and possibly stay after to clean up. But it would be quite fun, I think. Alice seems like quite a party master lol
And going with someone as just a friend does take all that extra pressure off, which is nice. I went to prom my freshman, sophomore and junior year. And I only had a date when I went as a freshman. I had more fun the years I just went with friends as a group instead of worrying about standards with the extra hormonal boys at that age. lol I really enjoyed them. Although, I really kind of wish I could have gotten to go to an Alice thrown party ;) It seems like it would be extra awesome! haha
Looking forward to the last chapter! :D You've done great so far!
| Professor Raye Starlite 3/25/11 . chapter 3
Yes lets go with you can't count. But it's wonderful!