hehehehe...she bit him...hehehe... anyway, I like your story. .

they kinda found Danny's and Dani's identitities pretty suddenly

those guys so need a beating again

NO NOT HIM ANYONE BUT HIM

ha ha go randi

not bad I like Danny and Dani's relationship though I like Dani being younger like in cannon but this works too. I do wish I knew you were re-writing this before I read the whole old version _'

ooookkkk. that is cool but why didnt phantom and vlad got angry at each other?what happened is there any sequel?

It's okay dude.

It's so fluffy I'm gonna die! Teehee!

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG! THIS IS F-ING AWAZING! HOW CAN YOU HAVE A D IN LANGUAGE ARTS? THIS IS AWESOME! XD

Okay, just a question... that I feel like I should already know the answer too... but, any reason that you HAVEN'T taken advantage of the summer time lay over from school, and made some serious head way into your active stories? I mean, we haven't seen any real content from you since March... or earlier. And each time you keep saying, 'school getting in the way', with a dash of 'life being getting in the way'. If I didn't know better I'd start to think that you've finally gotten tired of the story and just don't have the guts to tell your readers that you've decided to quit writing (at least these two)

Though, can't say I blame you, with so many writers not bothering to update, and many more quitting, telling avid readers that you're through with 'em is a sure fire way of getting rabid fans of your work showing up at your door, tying you down, and demanding you finish. Sadly, this day and age... that isn't a joke. Though, it might be less, in person, and more online cyber bullying. Oh, not saying I would do that to you... just saying so many people online have lost any sensibility, that there's a chance (not big, but there) to pick up a cyber stalker that'd bully you simply because you gave up writing on a story they liked.

i love it so far! one fact for ya (this is meant as a funfact, constructive critisism not to be rude at all) is that though you are right about fear of large crowds being like people claustrophobia, it is actually apparently coupled into the same phobia i have: agoraphobia, or fear of open spaces. funny right? just thought you might enjoy that fact and if you want you can mention it in the chapter or something. anyway, great job!

Your story is pretty good, you've just changed it a lot so it's harder to relate to Danny and Dani. That, and they seem a bit OOC. But that's okay, it's your story, after all.

MidnightRain

Look I know how you feel. I have depression to and since I turned 15 its been soo much worse. When I get two just down right hateful reviews I was down for a long time, heck I'm still down about that. I could not even finish the 3rd chapter(I cant spell my way out of a mime box) I started on a brand new book to get my mind of of it, and in my oppinen you are rightng a very good story so keep it up with this series.

Ah, that would explain it! Really liking your story so far, and it's also nice to find a good story that's actually been completed for once.