You have no plot development that makes me sad.

You reviewed yourself…that’s just the lowest of low…

You should write more then a paragraph for a chapter, try at least a page. Why am I trying to give you advice, you can’t write worth sh-it…

Ahh, by chapter six, your length gets better, but no cigar. You whored for reviews and only got a few, thank god for small favors.

Delete it. I hope not all of your stories are this bad…but somehow I think they are.

Great job, keep it up!

I love u so very I love ur story. You sexy basterd

It was awfully short -_- but even so, I adored this GWTW story very much. You're an awesome writer _

um, I certainly liked it. Chapters could use a bit of lenghening, but on the whole, I liked it very much.

I'm sad to see this story end.

But I'm happy that it did have a happy everafter ending..

It was a wonderful Story. I shall miss checking to see if you've added anymore too it..

Sw

p.s Thank you for notice how much I loved this story.

Jelena I was reading ur bio and u spelt RUSSELL's name wrong and I like ur ff.

You have the right idea..just lack of polt development. Make your chapters longer too...or put together all the ones to have into one chapter. Certainly you do not have enough to post a chapter. *nods* Other than that...excellent job.

this is relly good,.ive read aq lot of gone with the wind sequals and this is thje best so far

KEEP WRITING ITS GETTING GOOD! HEHEH

PLEASE WRITE MORE!

Great I loved this chapter.

Rhett finally realizing what a fool he has been. Now I hope he and Scarlett can work things out..

Sw

Well, the reason you might not get many replies, is because your chapters are very short, rediculously short.

There's barely anything there to comment on.

You have to have Rhett run after Scarlett and beg her forgiveness.

Sw

Hi

I enjoyed that very much I hope you are going to write more.

I hardly can wait to see what happens next.

Take Care

Tabitha