this is d first fan fic i've ever reviewed i loved it and i'm going 2 follow your fanfic's, you rock!

Loved it! It was amazing! Nice and short!

Finally! you write a story where Superman isn't portrayed as a complete jackass. I know, I know. It's pretty shitty how he awkwardly deflected Conner when they first met. But really, anyone else would have the same reaction to "OH, here's a clone of you. It's maybe two months old but it's you at 16 and by the way it was made to replace you or take you out. And, you're his mentor now even though you're a solo superhero and never had a partner, adult or otherwise". Please, if Superman had any other reaction something would be wrong. I've always thought that his reaction in the show was the most appropriate emotional way that a being could react to the situation. He slowly starts to warm up to him too, as he warms up to the idea, in the show. A few of your other stories are irritating in the intolerance some of the other superheroes have to Superman over it (especially Batman)- It's a natural response though! that's probably my only real rantable fact for your stories though.

Cool. A great idea for whacking CK upside the head with a Hulk punch. Good idea to check for programming too. A nice fic.

Very nice.

Loved it.

aww this was really sweet, I'm glad that clark finally came around, but it's a shame that it took conner getting hurt for him to finally wise up and care about him. i loved your use of imagery, and your writing was beautiful as you captured the scene between conner and clark beautifully. loved it. sorry i'm to lazy and tired to use caps right now.

too lazy to login...anyway, this was really good, the only problem I can think of is superman's turning point being sudden, I like the part when he realized himself that his son was real, but his conversation with barry afterwards makes it seem almost bipolar. Eh, maybe if he was more awkward, and...uncertain about it, but positive all the same. anyway, other than that this was great!

Clark finally steps up to the plate.

I really liked this story and the other Superboy you've written. I asked about the pairing in Muddling Through Grey because it sounded like a Kaldur/Conner pairing. It's not that I dislike yaoi. I frankly love it in some series but not in DC AU, well on very rare occasion when the writting is exceptional.

So when reading MTG, and this particular fanfic, I thought I had inadvertantly stumbled on a yaoi. I'm glad it's not but I can't get the association out of my head. I prefer Miss Martian and Superboy to the chagrin of many lol. But I do love the closee friendship you characterize between Superboy and Aqualad.

Keep up the good work!

that was a good ending! you should write more!

This was great. I liked the imagery used here. I like the way the adults were so protective of the kids, and I loved the way Batman talked to Superman. I liked especially the description of Superboy's nightmares, and the way the kids were all congregated around him despite the fact that they were still suffering from the gas somewhat, as well. I'm going to be recommending this to a friend of mine who is also totally obsessed with Young Justice and Superboy. :p

awww i can actually see this happening in the the show. iloved it . and the way u made superboys fear of being a weapon and hurting his freinds seems real please write more?:D

wish you could write a second part! maybe when they are both coherent or the part where they visit the farm.

Thank you for this piece, it was a great read.

Yayz! Clark has FINALLY manned up and became a father for Conner! I hope Batman tortures Scarcrow for that stupid fear gas! Preferably with the help of all the other mentors including Black Canary and ecspecially Superman! Anywayz xcuse my rant... Great story i luff it!)