Looks like a good time for Orange Star. Always a pleasure to see this update. Also, any thoughts on FE Awakening?

Good story so far, it's nice to see someone tackling the Advance Wars world. Keep it up.

Sorry for the lack of updates; first XCOM: Enemy Unknown, then graduate school classes kept me busy through October, and when November arrived, I focused 100% of my writing energy into National Novel Writing Month. I actually have something fairly good coming out of that, so I've been working on that for most of December as well.

I'm a few pages into the next chapter of this fic right now. I hope to have it out by early January at the latest, hopefully sooner.

hay when are you going to update your stourys. You have to do it today

Oooohh! Good story so far! I would've reviewed sooner, but I love the plot so far. It's easy to imagine all this going on during the story, too... except the CO battles, but you managed to make it work! Good job, and keep it up!

I can't really say that I'm that big a fan of the Advance Wars series, though I do like it well enough. But I can say that just based on my opinion, you've done the best job at capturing the character of the world that I've seen here.

The multiple fronts and commanders make this battle a lot more interesting for me. Can't wait to see what happens with OS's capital and possible CO/OF battles

Red Cluster's an extra nation I came up for the backstory, since the four main countries aren't the only ones on Wars World. They aren't going to become particularly relevant unless I finish adapting the first two Advance Wars games. I've been preparing a couple short writeups to place at the beginning of chapters to explain some extra stuff about the world and setting, but I've been busier than expected so I'm focusing on trying to finish up the next chapter in the next couple weeks.

I Love thise fanfick. I'm seeing theise made into a adance wars anamie about now and an new game based on your fanfick also who the f is the read cluster?

Now THAT was a nice, epic battle between COs

Liked the line about Breakcoms owning the world and humans just living in it, real clever. It holds true thanks to the Break Amplifiers, ironic how humans helped them gain control.

See you next chapter.

This fanfiction looks great. Good job.

Fire Emblem CO ). Looking forward to next update!

You're a very well-developed writer. You create visual representations of the characters that are phenomenal. You're great!

First, I'm going to toot my own horn by saying that I'm Adder21 from AWN and that I've been following you story since the beginning. About 1 minute ago I decided that I should become more involved in and review stories to encourage the writers.

I think your story has been very good so far, and I like the techno-supernaturalistic way you've explained the CO powers. All of your original characters are well crafted, but I find myself liking the Blue Moonians more than their orange counterparts.

On the whole, well done, I look forward to the next installment.

Thanks for the quick update! And a full blown war? sounds intriguing