Such a cute chapter! I hope to read more!

Hehe! Cute! Ducking boots! I'm sure you'll get Elia's character soon so no harm done. You'll get better!

For me personally, I found it hard to understand the location of where this cute oneshot occured. Perhaps a bit more decription on scenery would help.

I can't wait for more one shots. I hope there are still some more in ya.

If you need help or at least my insight on Elia's character, email me! XD